 Captain Hilts 2009-11-09 . chapter 1AH! So cute- It made such a nice smile spread across my face, ha ha. I liked the use of the song lyrics- very nice. Now as for the couple, I assumed it was Jak and Keira after the summary, then when I started reading I was like, oh, maybe it's Keira and Errol- holy crap! And...tadah! It really surprised me it was Dax and Tess at the end, but it automatically made it cuter and I actually said, 'Aw.' XD Good job! Keep up the writing!
~Hilts. ;D |