 mochiusagi 2009-11-18 . chapter 1aw that was so swet! but its sad that they didn't get to meet again though. T-T |
 my name is paper YAH 2009-11-14 . chapter 1this was so cute! i find a kid kaname to be beyond cute! |
 skie89 2009-11-10 . chapter 1 Come on all that effort and we never see them meet again? That's a pity. Very cute and very good. I loved the story. |
 Sagakure 2009-11-10 . chapter 1Aw, the poor little thing. ;_;
AND OMG, he's so adorable I kept squealing at the screen almost non stop!! XD AW~
If drawing bikes wasn't so time-consuming I'd have rushed to draw that scene, it was SO CUTE~! X3 *so many urges to draw tiny little Kaname being held by a protective Zero*
I love the normalcy of the scenes. XD
I also have a fic planned that has a scene for them in a store buying foodstuffs, but both are kids in it, and so it's very different from when one of them is a lot older as it is in your fic... Zero's protectiveness and hair-ruffling in your fic make me squee non-stop at Kaname's unbearably cute reactions, gyah~ XD *melts throughout the whole fic*
*melting all over the page as she reads* XD SO CUTE~! Such an adorable fic~! XD
Although it was sad that Zero kept telling him not to cry (at least he explained it was different than just bottling it up inside), and it's so sad that so far they've never seen each other again... D:
Hopefully they will at the academy or somewhere else one day... On their own or hopefully in a sequel some time maybe...? ;D
It would have been awesome if instead of leaving because dawn was arriving, little Kaname had stayed with them for a day, until the next night or so. X3 |
 irmina 2009-11-09 . chapter 1I really like this story. Little Kaname is so adorable. It must be love at first sight for him to be obsessed with vanilla pudding and honey lemon tea. Would you consider writing a sequel? I want to know Kaname's reaction when he sees Zero again and vice versa. Also, what is it about Takuma's grandfather? |
 Nineorchids 2009-11-09 . chapter 1Really nice one-shot. I like how you mix up the VK characters ages and relationships in your various stories. Zero is as always wonderful, and little Kaname is so sweet and polite even when he's hurting so much. I'll daydream a little about what might have happened if they met again later in life.
Thanks for writing this. |
 DiamondGurl01 2009-11-09 . chapter 1Great story loved very part of it and i hope later on you do make a sequel to it, cause i would love to see what will happen next. |
 YenGirl 2009-11-09 . chapter 1Lea! *glomps* Have missed you and your fics so much! Aw, you’ve made Kaname so awesomely and adorably cute again! *squeals and glomps him next* It’s so sad that he lost both his parents – yes, Juuri was devoted to Haruka but to leave her adorable little son all alone! *weeps*
Zero! *third glomp so far* He cooks here too? *drools at pancakes* Yes, he’s expert at mothering anyone but of course we love it when it’s Kaname *smiles*
Aw… *melts into mush* Your descriptions are spot on as always, Lea! I have this awesomely cute image of a little tear streaked and sniffling Kaname in my mind now only I can’t even put it on paper. Zero was so lovely – even knowing the child was a vampire, he couldn’t leave him alone. I loved how Kaname fell into every single little ‘trap’ Zero sat and that image of him sitting on that bike! *faints from cuteness overdose* And when Zero turned Kaname to face him! *faints again*
*manages to recover from swoons due to pudding* Oh yes, I can see that Ichiru’s quite the man here and LOL I want to know what happened to Cross that time! *giggles* And yes, ice cubes do give that little ‘crackling’ sound when they get dropped into liquid, don’t they? *nods* You hope for the best, Saito… *decides not to glomp him nor Ichiru*
‘The little one’? *melting and swooning spell starts again* Yes I know he’s darned cute, Zero, you don’t have to increase Kaname’s cuteness factor for me! Aw, vanilla… Kaname liked Zero ruffling his hair! *squeals, melts and swoons again, in random order* You know, if Kaname had needed blood then, I’m sure Zero would have given him some, hunter or not… how could anyone resists a starving child, especially one as well mannered and adorable as Kaname? And oh yes, Zero’s very amazing and fascinating too! Don’t even get me started on those lilac eyes, Kaname :D
Poor Kaname’s future doesn’t look so bright, does it? He already knows he won’t get any forehead-flicking or hair-ruffling even at this tender stage *tsks in sympathy*
Isn’t Zero a darlin’? *beams at him and resists the urge to glomp him, damp shirtsleeve and all* He’s so matured and… and… so lovely! *vocab has degenerated due to awesome cuteness of story* I so wish the ‘it’s time for home’ meant Kaname was going to stay with Zero but with him being a pureblood and the others hunters… *sighs* I loved that parting – sweet enough and still realistic… *glomps them both*
Aw, ten years have passed? *blinks* And here are the rest of the cast… and the honey lemon tea and the vanilla pudding *grins* Aido, Aido… he’s so much fun! And Takuma’s eyes and ears are as sharp as ever! *grins*
LOL Kaname can be forthright enough and see? He’s already given a good chunk of his heart (if not all of it) to someone he met only once – true love, I tell ya! *sniffles* I loved the last bit – at least Kaname wasn’t truly alone, he does have someone who understands him as much as is allowed between a pureblood and a noble. Good for you, Takuma! *final glomp*
Bore me, Lea? Never! This is lovely… *favourites story* Aw, you’re cruel for depicting Kaname’s reactions if he met Zero again and telling us you’re not going to do a sequel! *cries* Are you teasing us, Lea? Coz I’m dying to see Kaname’s reactions! Reconsider, please! |
 saya06 2009-11-09 . chapter 1This was a really nice story, could you make a sequel, please!
I would really like to see what it would be like if they were to meet again when they are older, so please make a sequel:) |
 VampyreLover 2009-11-09 . chapter 1Ne, ne, ne - R U going 2 add another chapter? |
 Yuuni-chan 2009-11-09 . chapter 1Swet^^.
I know you said you won't add anything, but a sequel would be so great. I was so sad when I came to the end, it was really far from being boring. Please? Pretty please? |
 kAtiE-lUvs-mcr 2009-11-09 . chapter 1aw... too bad there won't be more
it was a great story, though.. :D
i would really love to see them cross paths again. :D |
 VampierFreak 2009-11-09 . chapter 1wow that was really good^^, i really wanna find out if they meet again i was depressed when i found out it was a one shot*cries* but it was still awsome^^ |
 Jiggary 2009-11-09 . chapter 1This is totally kute! |
 Lenko 2009-11-09 . chapter 1i absolutely loved this little AU...it was adorable. Zero looking after Kaname even though he was a vampire, and Kaname being so cute and small *grins at them*. You didn't bore me one bit throughout the whole thing; in fact i was hoping that it would go longer and they'd have more chance to bond!
i know you've said you won't add anything, but i have to admit that i would LOVE to see their reunion! This was very well written and lovely :) thank you for writing it! |
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