Lovely!

Hope to read more soon;)

This is quite interesting. I'm looking forward to more. :)

renesmee indeed. exactly what i said when i read that. (or thought)

Lol

Irina

Luv dat 1

ohh he better not leave her [shakes fist] lol

too sweet with the least amount of words ever. can't wait for your next one :)

Loved it!

Short and straight to the point...excellent writing.

Congrats

I like it, it different but really good!

keep writing!