Hey. I love your story. It's so awesome. I can't wait to get a chance to read the continuation of this story on your other website. I really wish more people would write about Beka and Dylan, and once again great job!

:D.

I don't know if you know but you double posted the last part of this story.

Your story is so awesome so far. I can't wait till I have more time to read the other fifteen chapters! :D Great Job! :)

That was great! I love your story so far. I can't wait to read the rest! :)

Wow! I really love your story. Its great! :)

Very good story... I normally go for Tyr/Beka... but I like this D/B pairing... is there anything more about what happens with Cassidie being on the ship now? And does Dylan sign the planet?

Ok i know i have stated in the past i am not a fan of B/D romances but that waz a very good story very interesting.

A really good story.

good suspense

hey good mornign after chapter

i liked it

but you have a couple of spelling mistakes but htats okay

Hey! Let's see, something different...well, you have my undying respect for your ability to think of interesting chapter titles, because I can't...great story! I LOVE it, I really do!

Jen

Hey

I love this story. the little girl is cute and I think that there are not enough

Beka/Dylan fics out there. The 1st person is really a nice different touch. I

hope this will fill out to all that it is right now. All of Beka's worries and

concerns will be touched on I hope. Please write more.

I really like the chapter and i think you have tyr's method talking down its all respectful but has a bite, edge to it

sorry to say that i am still pretty slow on pick up

i still can't figure out who is talking and thinking

am i the only slow one here?

that was good

still the switching of perspective is confusing

sorry im slow

I really like this so far. But you can't leave it like this. Dylan and Beka need a happy ending. Please. :)

I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!