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Reviews for: Ash Ketchum: Man of Steel
pheinodragcatwarrior 3/26/12 . chapter 3
another very good chapter. and i can't wait to read the next chapters. also the heros are batman, the flash, superman, and the anti hero's whole be the punisher and the judge who also was two-face.
pheinodragcatwarrior 3/26/12 . chapter 2
another very good chapter.
pheinodragcatwarrior 3/26/12 . chapter 1
a very good chapter.
gotenks1986 12/12/11 . chapter 3
Another stellar chapter I can't wait for more I would like to see if you decide to integrate the entire Justice League and the major villains of DC Comics or not it sounds like you already have The Joker and Batman in here please update so we know what happens!
Swagnilla-Ice-1985 12/11/11 . chapter 3
This chapter is good, and looks like the Joker is in town!
gotenks1986 11/24/11 . chapter 2
Truly fascinating you have used fictionalized versions of real cities and fictional cities like South Park although I doubt we'll be reading any "oh my God! we killed Kenny! We're Bastards! Or you Bastards!" In this fanfiction I can't wait to see what happens next.
Ray423 11/20/11 . chapter 2
I must say that this is much better written than some of the other Superman/pokemon crossovers. Much better. I like how you are incorporating both together the way you are doing. The story line does not lose you and it does not throw you around like some of the others. Well done and I hope you continue.
Swagnilla-Ice-1985 11/20/11 . chapter 2
Great chapter, and it's good to see you are working on this story again!
Swagnilla-Ice-1985 11/8/11 . chapter 1
Looks to be a good start! I look forward to updates!
Uhvgchjfvjgv 10/17/11 . chapter 1
This is an awesome story! I just hope it docent take as long as the prequel.
ss4gogeta27 7/10/11 . chapter 1
Looks interesting please update this story soon your previous Ash is Superman story was great I look foreword to seeing how this turns out and by the way who is the villain or evil organization Ash/Superman will be fighting next
ss4gogeta27 7/10/11 . chapter 1
Looks interesting please update this story soon your previous Ash is Superman story was great I look foreword to seeing how this turns out and by the way who is the villain or evil organization Ash/Superman will be fighting next
K.T.Waterflower 11/15/09 . chapter 1
Very good prologue. Like how you introduce the main character without telling us his name and how you give us the outline of what happened after the last story. can't wait to see what happens 1st but the only thing is that you need to look over your work cause you made a few errors.

Example:

And much like Superman, the world has moved 'one' from his disappearance.

'one' should have been on right?

Only for carnage and bloodshed. But that will 'son' change.

'son' should be soon.

It was a very small mistake so it doesn't really matter. I'm not usually the one to made correction errors especially since I'm a VERY bad speller but i feel like to give a nice review and to give you a helpful hint . oh and i guest that you're a Christian cause you made a reference to Jesus Christ. But superman is no where near as great compare to Him, just saying. Again can't wait to see what happens next especially when Misty comes back.
Batthan 11/9/09 . chapter 1
It is interesting, very interesting.
dbzgtfan2004 11/9/09 . chapter 1
This is a good story. Please continue. Ash and Misty forever.
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