I loved that last line! Totally Gibbs!

lol-lies how cute.

very cute! i like lyra but tali died so is this like if tali hadnt died?

Love it! Great story idea! Can't wait for more!

Awesome story please continue. I like Lyra and it is so like Tony not to get along with kids. Very good job keepng them in character.

i love it! i love lyra, she is so cute! so adorable, all of it. : )

nice idea! can't wait to see what happens!
ncistwin2

This is such a cute idea! I love it!! my sis is reading it now and should review too, you'll know her when you read her username. PLEASE update soon!!
Ncistwin1