“The chances of Raito-kun being Kira has been risen up to 99.9 percent-“

Once again, the teenage prodigy wondered why he even opened his big mouth to begin with.

“But why?!”

“For refusing to shut up and take it like a man.”


<3
love.

Sorry, but there was nothing special in this chapter. When will the action start?

Oh, good. A shota-esque LxLight. I never see any around here.

To be honest, I planned on doing one based on Lolita with these two (it was supposed to be a parody, I guess), but it turned into something a little more darker. I'm glad you're doing this, though. I happen to find the age difference between L and Light interesting, for whatever reason. Maybe I'm a little desensitized to themes such as this, but I, for one, find this sweet. Especially the hug. My, I am quite the sentimental fool.

:D YAY!! Light, don't feel so uncomfortable, it's cute^^ But I'm a pervert and L doesn't seem to be different. I like this, actually, Light and L have a seven years gap between them, after all (though that has to be more than ten years here^^) They're cute, this makes me wanting to hug both of em^^

Uh-oh. L!! DON'T BE A PERVERT!! NOES!!:D

Me wanna see what happens next^^

Lighto-brighto is always wasting so much effort on his prescious foolish pride. *sigh* He's a lost cause. Why can't he be more like L and be all ninja-like *does amature ninja moves* XD Anyways, nice start. I'd love to see longer chapters in the future.

This au sounds interesting. I can't wait to find out more about it.

HUH?! Nvm I am confused as to what the conflict is...

Aw. Poor L. What happened? I forgot...

I LOVE ACROSS THE UNIVERSE AND I HATE CLOWNS!!

Gr.

Scary clowns. Br.

LOL L is a professor!!:D Makes him feel a little old to me^^ Oh, well...

'Watch me try.'

You go L!!<3

Aw! How sweet, and cute, and adorable, and fluffy, and -keeps going on forever-

Lol. Sorry about that! ^^; If you haven't learned yet, I tend to babble. But anyways, I thought the ending there was really sweet. Sweeter than chocolate chip cookies. Very kawaii. I mean, there's really no other way to describe it. For any other continuations with THIS universe, I'd keep it pg-13. At least, for now. You know?

OMFGILOVEITTOO! You simply must continue this one on some more, Hari-chan. Especially after a cliff hanger ending like that one. -le sigh- I feel like such a girl (-.-) getting all worked up like that, but I really love this universe. And you have such an intruiging sense of humor (one that I get... and that's saying something. ^^;)

Oh, one question though! Was it L that had the light blue eyes, you said? It was... slightly confusing. Or I'm just an idiot. XD Either way.

*cough* I think I'd kill to rp with someone like you, lol.

I love this AU too and I am so glad you have continued it. I wonder when L will notice that the reason he has suddenly been reinspired is standing next to him. XD

:3 SO ROMANTIC!!:D Aww, I love it...

...Okay, I feel bad about not being able to review till chapter 4, but I've been uber busy with school and work... That, and my parents wouldn't log the computer on.

But anyways, I'm looking forward to reading more of this. How long will it be? Do you know?

Oh, and I wanted to let you know, I facking love HAPPY FUN TIME. It made me lol big time! Definitely write more of it.