 VanishingLight 2010-01-04 . chapter 1I just love this story;D Do you realize how much it made me laugh?XDD
And Yagari's persoective on the couple Kaname/Zero is just too preciousXD I wish I was him, though, living with too cuties in love...*drools*
I hope you continue soon!;) |
 kei-hikaru 2009-12-16 . chapter 1Wow, you're... WHOA, you're so cool. FAR MORE than just simply cool. You really did the AU justice, which I haven't seen in almost any fic, for the simple, daily life AU like this.
I absolutely love the glimpses of their backgrounds-slash-pasts too. Give me a day more, then I'll really figure out the details you mentioned, but now...
I'm simply stunned at how well the fic goes. Wow.
Okay, I'm a bit off from Zero being called fluffy bunny inside so openly, but we all know it was true, so yeah. XD I always more to the stereotype that it was "one-or-less people know the fact". Meant Kaname knew it, but yeah.
More background stories made me indulging in this fic. Wait. It was such a sin reading it, much like eating a very expensive Belgian chocolate. Honestly.
Kaname was so... Kaname! He was being a jerk without really making an effort to it, and just to Yagari. Urm, I mean, people tend to see him as someone in the cloud nine, unreachable and so on and so forth, but Yagari caught him as a jerk. insatiable, sex-deprived jerk, which is so right.
And Cross! And Yagari! HOLY-- It was so hilarious at Yagari's expense for Kaito's comments about Yagari and his "wonderful" life. Crush, indeed! XD
You did them justice. Very much so. And I want to make my comments in CAPS and exclamation points, but then you might feel not in the mood to read my comment, so... yeah. GREAT FIC. I kinda demand you to do more, if you please. :D |
 jgood27 2009-11-17 . chapter 1good story, its interesting seeing them in a normal setting |
 VampireKnightfangirl 2009-11-16 . chapter 1yay new story~~! i love it!! |
 YenGirl 2009-11-13 . chapter 1This was hilarious, Lea! I'm finding it hard to picture a 19 year old Yagari with both eyes intact but you did it! ROTFL *chokes on her own saliva* I loved his reaction when he walked into what must be one hawt make out scene! *drools and wishes she was the one standing there* I wouldn't have wasted any time squinting at the door number, trust me! :D
So our Yagari here isn't keen on same gender youy know what, huh? Aw, too bad, dear, you have no idea what you're missing!
But wait - maybe he does? *perks up when Cross comes into the picture* Very interesting the way Yagari is trying not to freak out *wants so badly to know what happened last time* And OMG, he described Cross' hair with 'adorable'! Yagari, don't you pretend to be nauseated at male and male when you have this 'fixation' on a fellow male!
OK, can picture pink cup easily together cream cheese-loaded cracker but long hair up in a bun? *screws face up and succeeds in looping long ponytail into a bun*
I don't think Kaname and Zero are hard to get along with - us yaoi fangirls would kill for the chance to drool and nosebleed endlessly! *giggles*
'“Flavored or non-flavored?”' *chokes on laughter again* Aw, just keep some handy, Yagari and - waittaminute, why would Cross have some on him? *face splitting grin* Aw, Zero's so adorably cute when he's blushing and stammering! *squeals* Guess it isn't hard to figure out who's seme and who's uke here, huh? Oh yes, totally agree with Cross on Zero being a fluffy bunny *squeals*
Poor Yagari - getting all his sensibilities assaulted at once, if not by kinky roomies, then by those he knew from memory and then girls who spew out personal info on their monthly problems! *chokes again* Go on staring at that mark on the wall, dear...!
LOL, Kaname's parents wanted him to have uhm, you know what at that age? *winces* Ah well, since it's Zero, I have no complaints whatsoever... and of course Kaname and Zero would share a room... Kaname sure seems very uhm, well, not very nice in this story but at least Zero can order him around! LOL so that's why Yagari decided to go with a glare from now on? *snickers*
Zero has different moods too, doesn't he? But I'm glad that him being a good cook stays the same! Aw, it was cute how he stopped Cross from meddling with Kaname's food and that cute little thing with the egg roll that he left for Kaname to eat! Hmm wonder what's with the wistful look on Cross' face though... he wouldn't be having a crush on either boy, would he?
I knew it! Cross is Yagari's crush and OMG *tries to peek at Zero's poster* tell me that wasn't a nude pose of him? Or don't tell me!
Aw, that was a sweet exchange between Cross and Yagari and see why Cross can live with Kaname and Zero? He can live with anyone! And he isn't even afraid of Yagari's glare! *giggles* You gotta work on that one a bit more but it's not going to deter Cross!
Well, Kaname may be the sex addict but I stand corrected - it's Zero who calls the shots in this relationship! Precious legs huh... *giggles and wonders what a Kaname in drag would look like*
Well, I loved it, Lea! But this really, really calls for a Chapter 2. Kaname and Zero are lovely of course but they're pretty much established by now (10 years!) so my inner Cross and Yagari fangirl is pining for some Cross and Yagari action... heck, just more dialog would make her happy! :D |
 BeautifulSimplicity 2009-11-12 . chapter 1Eh!! I...I am now in love with Yagari and Cross XD! K-keep writing ^^ |
 Lenko 2009-11-10 . chapter 1*bursts out laughing* i'll admit, that WAS a weird ass ride! hahaha. but its one im looking forward to continuing! it was very, very funny. i felt so bad for Yagari throughout the whole thing. Kaname...why is he such an asshole?! and cross-dressing?! hahaha. Zero is cute and caring...kind of anyway, as usual! *hugs him*. Aww. Cross was so cute too. I didn't like how self absorbed Kaname and Zero were in regards to Cross...i mean, he's the ONLY person that puts up with them and they still treat him like they do most others. Anyways, loved it! Keep writing! |
 irmina 2009-11-09 . chapter 1This so totally awesome!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter. |
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