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Alpha
2002-12-09
ch 10, anon.
abuseYou wanna be NICE to Angel?! Interesting...

If you haven't already in later chapters, do the whole "Connor becomes 17-19" thing, and also throw an extremely amused and sarcastic Spike his way with many "Peaches" and "Bloody poofs".

And when you say season 3 do you actually mean S4, cuz we're halfway in S4 here in the boring states of america.

Cool story. I like.

PS Don't give Angel too much of a break. He WAS a sadistic bastard, and needs to seek redemption, and to lose 15 pounds, in any order.
Mrs O-Town
2002-12-08
ch 28,
abuseOh, Hun! Don't feel no one is reading you're fic. Loads of people read but don't review (which sucks cos we need feedback!).
Loved the chapter (albeit the lack of C/A but we won't go there ^_^).

Can't wait for more!

Luv ya

T xXx
Imzadi
2002-12-07
ch 28,
abuseOh, yes, I do love this story. Lindsey is a sweetie and now Angel's coming to accept him. And Cordy is well-drawn. You also write well, Anita, but I've told you that before.
ninja-kitty
2002-12-07
ch 28,
abuseYay! Finally another chapter! ABout time too! Another ace chapter. No! DOn't give Angel any action in the romance department! It's bad enough seeing Cordelia without Angel!
Oh heck! Do what you want, When i started reading this i said i would hate it...but i don't! I thinks it's totally brilliant!
Flitter
2002-12-07
ch 28,
abuseAwwww, I love this! You are so not right when you say no one reas this! Ppple do, they're just fools! Sorry for goin Morbidda Destiny on ya. crisis of the kind that turns up around every other day or so, and I let it escape the confines of the deep box of nightmares that is my mind.

Luv ya

*S*
JayBee-Bug
2002-10-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseErr, sorry 'bout givng the 'didn't break up in paragraphs' lecture on the other fic, didn't stop and LOOK at the other reviews before I did that. Ahem. This looks like an interesting fic, I'm gonna start reading it...(during all my homework breaks, so nice to have ficcy goodness to escape to!)
Imzadi
2002-10-15
ch 27,
abuseAnd that, fellow readers, is why I love Lindsey. He's been through so much. He deserves the happiness he's getting in this story. Thank you for another wonderful chapter. I especially loved the Lindsey/Angel/Wes conversation. Well done!
Sabrina Spellman
2002-08-06
ch 20, anon.
abuseI think that the story has gone for a phyco flipp, but, hey, that's what makes it interesting!
Sabrina Spellman
2002-08-06
ch 17, anon.
abuseI think that you should do a spike's point of veiw, just to get into his thoughts, see what he really thinks about everything that's been going on!
Sabrina Spellman
2002-08-06
ch 15, anon.
abuseNay
Mrs O-Town
2002-08-06
ch 26,
abuseAwww, poor Angel! Bad Anita, bad BAD Anita! But i can't stay mad at you for long!

This was a great chapter. Twins! Yay!

Mrs O xXx

ps: I think i'd better get a move on with chapt 6...
Adele Elisabeth
2002-08-06
ch 6, anon.
abuseNow, I know I said I would bite my tongue and read this...
...but I just can't bite that hard.

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ANGEL! **cries**

I should probably read the rest before I make any accusations, but -still-. How could you? How -could- you? To -Angel-? **shakes her head and sighs dramatically**

I don't know if I can read this, now...

I'll try. I really will. Honest.

But...how could you?

Okay, shutting up. Now.

Good writing. **cringes in realizing she's just complimented the damn story**

Well...yes. Bye.

**a soft whisper of a voice whispers mournfully: that's just wrong...**
Flitter
2002-08-05
ch 26,
abuseMe like this Chapter! Very sweet, and I knew from the *title* that they were gonna have twins. You're really addicted to cliches, aren't you? Lol. Is one of the tewins gonna inherit the visions, then? Cos that could be cool! Very very cool, kudos to you, asnd tell Imzadi to review and help me wit fic! lol

You *know* who I am! So i aint gonna sign. Wait, dammit!
Imzadi
2002-07-16
ch 25,
abuseI love this. Why not finish it up with a wedding and then the birth of the baby (I'm still hoping for a girl)?
Flitter
2002-07-15
ch 15,
abuseyou DARE bring Kate into this brill fanfic and i will slaughter you! I love the lindsey/cordy thing, only at chapter 15, but this is good. carry on!
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