This was nice, I liked reading about this from Althena's pov and about Chloe's clinging nature and cute crush. Interesting thought process during the "R" scene; it makes me feel like becoming Noir myself.

Now that was a great fic. Althena is really cool but my fav is Chloe (the child and the killer in one) she can be so innocent one momment then evil the next. And the thing with the fork, I think that's wicked and disterbing all in one. Again great fic. Gotta jet.

great story we need more yuri and altena is not the best kirika and chloe r kirika for her close combat skills and chloe for her progetils skils. and chloe is soo cute same with kirika if I was a girl I would dress like chloe one day then kirika the next and seep alternating. ya right more yuri. more yuri no yuoi yuri only

This story is very good. I really like it.

Odd, but good. A bit too short for my liking though.

This is a great noir fic! I love Altena to death, she's one of my favoritest characters in noir. Strange, I KNOW. But I can't help that I'm drawn to her. Wish she was my mother. So kind, caring, and loving. _ Well, keep up the good work. We need more fics with Altena in it! *lol*

Love your story
its awsome
Hey have you seen the 7 vol yet (last episodies)

WOW. That was a freakin' incredible job on something that too many authors would have botched on. It is convincing that things could have happened in the blanks of the story,this way.
Chloe's the best! ha ha.

I love the Kirika/Chloe pairing. There simply isn't enough with it.

You jumped around a bit, and need to work on your discriptions a little. Chloe's love for Kirika would've been more beleivable if you would've made them interact a bit more. I'm glad to see some Kirika/Chloe though. Keep it up and I'll keep reading your stuff!

wow. that was EXTREMELY good. and your right. slash is fun :)

Every aspect of this fic surprised me. I fully aggree that the rarity of Noir fics has to end. Your approach is very thorough. I didn't expect to find such an elaborate portrayal of such an important supporting character of the series as one of the 5 fics currently listed. I'm convinced I'll be watching the entire series again just to remind myself how much of your writing is directly in the series, and how much is your truly impressive expansion of it. You deserve more reviews, though I can already predict their average content. Thank you.

You're absolutely right! Mireille is HOT! VERY HOT! I luved this fic! Althena's pov and Chloe's character was so well done. Please write more M/K fics! there's so little out there!

More Noir fics please! I love the way you wrote all the characters, I think that in this they all seemed to be tragic figures that you feel sorry for. There's nothing and no one to hate in this fic, you have to keep writing.

Psychotic Kind Mother fits Althena so well ;) Enjoyed the fic a lot, good descriptions and frame of mind for the charactres. Hope you write more Noir fics in the future.

Well written fic. Interesting insights. I really liked the scenes depicting Chloe and Kirika's early childhood. I hope you continue to write more Noir fics.