  Cykefan 7/15/02 . chapter 12 This was just fun. I liked the addition of Mystique to the storyline and surprises. |
| Cykefan 7/13/02 . chapter 12 Nice action. And Betsy gets to look good and help someone out for a change. Something we rarely get to see so it's a welcome change. |
| 4Rogue 2/21/02 . chapter 7 Mystique! I love Mystique messing with Rogue. Definitely want to see what she's up to. |
 Verthril 2/21/02 . chapter 7Good story. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| SR 2/4/02 . chapter 6 COUNTINUE! |
| Framling 2/4/02 . chapter 1 Hmm... I like where this is going. Just one eentsy suggestion - to make it a little easier to read, try spacing the paragraphs a bit more - one blank line between them makes it a heck of a lot easier on the eyes, and there are people who refuse to read anything not paragraphed, which would be a real shamein this case. Keep it up! |
| T 1/19/02 . chapter 5 Great story, more please! 8o) |
| T 1/18/02 . chapter 5 Great story, please continue soon! |
| T 1/17/02 . chapter 2 Great story, please continue soon! |
| Taxi 1/17/02 . chapter 2 This is really good. I like that Remy is mad at Rogue for a change instead of Rogue always being mad at Rem. |
| Samman 1/16/02 . chapter 2 Interesting...Just upload some more and quick! |
| sensor girl not signed in 1/16/02 . chapter 2 this is cool so far, I really want to see where you take this...keep writin'! |
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