This was just fun. I liked the addition of Mystique to the storyline and surprises.

Nice action. And Betsy gets to look good and help someone out for a change. Something we rarely get to see so it's a welcome change.

Mystique! I love Mystique messing with Rogue. Definitely want to see what she's up to.

Good story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

COUNTINUE!!!

Hmm... I like where this is going. Just one eentsy suggestion - to make it a little easier to read, try spacing the paragraphs a bit more - one blank line between them makes it a heck of a lot easier on the eyes, and there are people who refuse to read anything not paragraphed, which would be a real shamein this case. Keep it up!

Great story, more please!!! 8o)

Great story, please continue soon!!!

Great story, please continue soon!!!

This is really good. I like that Remy is mad at Rogue for a change instead of Rogue always being mad at Rem.

Interesting...Just upload some more and quick!

this is cool so far, I really want to see where you take this...keep writin'!