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Reviews for: A Moment Too Late
daianapotter 8/14/08 . chapter 1
very sad
Love.me.or.leave.me 5/3/07 . chapter 1
That was cute! I have to admit I think how you jumped scenes was kinda confusing, but great work none-the-less.
Almandine-Azaleea 6/8/06 . chapter 1
This so stunningly beautiful! The descriptions are so vivid, and the characters almost jump off the page.

I love the introspect into Tamahome and Miaka's thoughts.

Tamahome's reaction to the news was so true to his character, it made it all the more touching.

I absolutely loved the end sentence- it gives a sense of hope.

Beautiful story!
Havoc 2/22/06 . chapter 1
WA!Wow this was so sad...*sobb*...this is so good...can you please continue?Please?Pritty Please?
Boogie 5/19/02 . chapter 1
Were there 2 different stories? Cuz the first one said Miaka's dead and the second one she's alive. But anyways, tamahome and miaka FOREVER!
P-chan-TheLostGirl 1/17/02 . chapter 1
I'm slightly confused but I really liked this fic! NOrmaly TamaxMiaka fics are really...Well just over the edge sappy, but I thought this was very well done and I'd even recomend it to my Miaka hater friends. I hope you continue writing and keep up the good work. .V
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