I liked the text, but I reacted to a recurring language-related mistake. Unless you meant it to be in Irish Gaelic, you can't say Scotland "Go bragh". In Scottish Gaelic, the correct expression is Scotland "gu bràth", which means the same thing.
But as I said; other than that, your text was really good. I liked it :-)

wallace was a great hero he was one of the first scots freedom fighters he died still unwilling to give in to englands will even when tortured he died on his feat. this poem truly gives him greadet

that was wonderful, very deep and almost made me cry. Great job! Jess