That was really good. I've often wondered what would happen to Dawn because she was the key. Would it die when she did or would it just revert back to what it was? But it causing her to be immortal was totally plausible. I liked who was left and how they gathered. I liked that Dawn's humanity slowly slipped away and that in the end she forgot because eventually you would. Good job!

Wow this is beautiful and tragic, great work.

This was both sad and brilliant. I absolutely loved it.