Aaawww that was so cute! Loved it! I know this was a long while ago but I hope you won! Team Edward!

that was awsome you should have wrote chapters.

That was a very interesting story.

I think this was a great read!

It was enjoyable, fun and it had me laughing :D

I really loved this line "you are now my indestructible vampire goddess."

"You know he wanted to test the newborn." This is just so perfectly Emmett!

Thank you Joayla :)

I love this anniversary idea. Edward finally finds out what it feels like to lose and Bella knows that she is know his equal. Very well done.

I enjoyed seeing Bella and Edward being so relaxed and just having fun especially on their anniversary

Cute Bella/Edward story

That was great. Thanks for sharing it. I really enjoyed your Bella and Edward.

Well, there are a lot of run-on sentences and punctuation errors. But, the idea is really, really cute. I love to see the two of them being playful and relaxed and having fun together. It was a very nice way to spend their anniversary. Thanks for writing this!

This was a cute story! There were a lot of grammar errors that did distract from the story quite a bit. I also thought the number of times they called each other "baby" was a bit much...kind of out of character. I like the storyline, though!

Thank you for submitting your entry! I particularly enjoyed the line- "I want you to feel equal… my gift to you is trust."

Good luck in the contest!

ebhg:)