|Reviews for Equal Combat|
| MissCoppersMom 4/3/12 . chapter 1
Aaawww that was so cute! Loved it! I know this was a long while ago but I hope you won! Team Edward!
| hadiya 4/15/10 . chapter 1
that was awsome you should have wrote chapters.
| BellaLovesEdwardMoreThanJake 4/13/10 . chapter 1
That was a very interesting story.
| Decadent Anarchy 12/14/09 . chapter 1
I think this was a great read!
It was enjoyable, fun and it had me laughing :D
I really loved this line "you are now my indestructible vampire goddess."
"You know he wanted to test the newborn." This is just so perfectly Emmett!
Thank you Joayla :)
| Lady Dragona 12/10/09 . chapter 1
I love this anniversary idea. Edward finally finds out what it feels like to lose and Bella knows that she is know his equal. Very well done.
| hippogriff-tamer 12/1/09 . chapter 1
I enjoyed seeing Bella and Edward being so relaxed and just having fun especially on their anniversary
| bmthespian 11/16/09 . chapter 1
Cute Bella/Edward story
| cinroc 11/13/09 . chapter 1
That was great. Thanks for sharing it. I really enjoyed your Bella and Edward.
| Justine Lark 11/11/09 . chapter 1
Well, there are a lot of run-on sentences and punctuation errors. But, the idea is really, really cute. I love to see the two of them being playful and relaxed and having fun together. It was a very nice way to spend their anniversary. Thanks for writing this!
| alycaly 11/10/09 . chapter 1
This was a cute story! There were a lot of grammar errors that did distract from the story quite a bit. I also thought the number of times they called each other "baby" was a bit much...kind of out of character. I like the storyline, though!
| ebhg 11/10/09 . chapter 1
Thank you for submitting your entry! I particularly enjoyed the line- "I want you to feel equal… my gift to you is trust."
Good luck in the contest!