Great work, Jess... very funny chapter!

This was a pretty good chapter Jess. I liked it alot, and I hope you write more soon. Hmmm... speaking of speaking German there's a web site that will translate entire sections of text in German (and a few other languages) the site's URL is: .com/ . It's pretty good I go there to translate some of my work into Portuguese. Anywho... I hope you write more soon, Ashley's a riot (LOL!)

Cute!

Really good, Jess. Tora is just so cute around children of his own kind. Can't wait to check out the next chapter, bye for now!

I finally sat down to read this all the way through, and I must admit, I'm impressed. I really like the way this story's developed and I'm currently looking forward to much more from you. This story is good, real good.

Chow.

Ok, very interesting. Lets see that next chapter so we can figure out more about these army guys. What about the little girl monster from the inn? Who is she really? Bye for now!

Oh Jess, that was so sad. Actually, I thought Ushio would have been able to help bring the kid back to life with the beast spear's power. Guess not, huh? But, why does Ushio dream of the more adult monster when the baby doesn't even live to grow up? Questions and more questions from this chapter, but it was written very well. Good luck on the next bit. Bye!

Great, Jess-chan! Just wonderful. Very funny, especially Simon. Looks like Ushio and Tora are fighting again. See you next chapter!

Great chapter! Tora and Ushio met up again! And now Ushio's stuck there for another three days (nice job on that part). Can't wait to see what they do next! See yah!

Great job, Jess! The feelings were really sweet. I love the dream Tora had about meeting silent demon hunter Ushio. I hope Tora goes to check on him, that would be funny. I wonder what Tora would say and do if he found out about Ushio's... predicament with Asako. I can just sense the amount of teasing. Well, see you later. Can't wait to read the next chapter, bye!

This is fun, please write more, Jessiy!

Chow.

GREAT STORY! It's sooo cute. I love it. (please don't delete it, sob!). I'd love to read the next chapter. (sorry, I've read it before and forgot to review, thanks for the email).

Also, you've shown us a lot of Ushio's hidden emotions, but what does Tora really feel during these events. He seems to cold sometimes, it's hard to understand how he really feels. Why does he finally decide to return?(besides that the others have no modern conveniences) I'd love to read the next chapter, please post it! bye!