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jaydedangel69 5/12/10 . chapter 1
This follow up was AWE-SOME! :D Loved it! Great job! Thank you. :)
JDPhoenix 12/1/09 . chapter 1
Oh! The whole thing was sweet but the last line made it absolutely adorable! I'm actually more glad that Sandy and Tom get to see this than anything. Though, everything about this story was great. It's completely wonderful!
xovickixo 11/13/09 . chapter 1
Oh, I just loved this to bits! So very delighted to see you did a followup to 'November'!

Kevin would so be the boyfriend all the moms liked, wouldn't he?

XD Love the thought of Kevin picking up on Macy's mad trashtalking skills.

And of course the teams crumbled into a free-for-all. That's just how snowball fights pan out. Also, now I'm super excited for our first real snowfall.

And the inclusion of the parents at the end? So sweet and just perfection!
Rue Des Violettes 11/12/09 . chapter 1
This was so much fun to read! Macy... in a snowball fight... it was always going to work! But I thought you wrote it really fluidly and the best bit was clearly when Macy hit Nick in the face.

If there's ever a snow fight with the Lucas Brothers, I would so be there...

XOXO Vi
suburbs 11/10/09 . chapter 1
So sweet - and I loved that you included Frankie. It was a great follow-up. Favorite line was probably when he told her he remembered everything she said. But I really liked when she hit Nick in the face with the snowball as well. You did a great job of working everyone in and communicating the genuine affection they all had for each other. Plus, you're the only one besides me to write from the challenge so far :)
digigirl02 11/10/09 . chapter 1
Cute.
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