Wow that was amazing please update soon!

Wow this is awesome, you have truly wrote a master piece of a story. GOOD JOB!

Well, this is extremely interesting! You're teaching me words I don't even know! Geez...can't wait for a new installment!

Nice chapter! I learned two words today! And don't worry about not updating for a while since I have somewhat the same problem. I've just been so caught up on work lately that I don't have enough time to check everything. Looking forward to further developments with Sam, Jerry, and of course WordGirl!

Wow, this is getting good, what will happen to WordGirl? Great job and good luck!:)

hey it's 2011 already wheres the rest of the story been waiting over 2 years now HAVE TO KEEP ON WRITING ALISI THORNDYKE

Two things to note:

One, the name of the city is usually noted as Fair City. Only once on the site is it called Preposterocity, yes, I know, but everywhere else it is Fair City and I do believe you may want to fix that. Once on the site it spells "Granny May" "Granny Mae" and it bugs me every time I see it. Anyway, I've seen many errors on the site I never see anywhere else, trust me, I'm claiming to be the biggest WordGirl fan on Earth and it is probably true too. I can prove it if you want me to.

Second point, Scoops doesn't ever notice nothing happening in Fair City, in fact, he often writes articles on boring material, so much so that Becky makes a comment in a couple of episodes. But those are minor details. As far as quality, save a few spelling errors, I'm cliffhangered not to mention impressed with your first WordGirl fanfic. It's getting exciting, too! I hope this is a help to your WordGirl fanfic writing! (Not trying to be a bug you know.)

Sorry I didn't read it sooner. Heehee! Nice start Alisi! But one thing bugged me, sorry I'm so picky, but you spelled "Violet" as "Violent" twice. It was really creeping me out. :) Besides that, I like that touch of mystery. It's something I never seem to be able to fit into my WG fanfics. Of course, I normally write them as scripts for the WordGirl show, which normally has little to no suspense. Anyways, nice chapter, and I must say, it reads smoothly, like most of your Cyberchase fanfics! ;)

I like your story so much i was at edge of my seat, can you please keep writing it PLEASE WITH SUGAR ON TOP :) Thanks

UPDATE! This story is really REALLY good! ;D

needs chapter3!

I love this story so far! I honestly can't wait for the next chapter. Great job!

This is getting good! I can't wait for the next chapter Alisi! This is great! _

I like the new dramatic plot element of a man searching for a power source for his son. Still, I'm confused of the city's name. As the actual name hasn't been announced in the show, I assume that you have given it the name Fair City. But this other author said that according to the official WordGirl website the city is called something like Preposterocity.

Still, you did a good job. Just try to come up with more advanced words to introduce as I already know about Significance and Complex.

Wow, that was good and can't wait for more. Great job and good luck!:)