 Terranova210486 11/13/09 . chapter 1Please update soon! |
 tehMimo 9/5/05 . chapter 10Oer! Is this the last chapter?
Heheheh! This was really funny... I saw the chappie name Chemical Warfare but I didn't think it was this!
Hehe! |
 darksupersayian 7/28/05 . chapter 10This story is classic. You do a good job of making fun of Frieza, Cold, Zarbon, Dodoria, and Nappa. They are really perverts. Anyway keep up the good work. |
 Darth Pooky 3/29/05 . chapter 5(on the floor pounding the carpet into a pulp while laughing endlesly) this is a TRUE parody to Spaceballs! O I loveitIloveitIloveit! The best part is that you have your own twist to it! Chi-chi as Dot Matrix? vegeta as Lone Star? nappa as Barf? Hee lair ee oso! |
 SasatheShy 3/11/05 . chapter 10Oh my goodness! (Falls out of chair laughing her butt off.) I love this story and the whole idea! I actually read this story at a website called DBZ Romance Version 2, but then in the chapter where Freize and that other guy were looking up your story at I just had to come and review!
Please, please continue soon! I love V/B!
Sam*
P.S. You know the part with the alien coming out of the man? You sould make that be Baby, from DBGT, he'd be perfect. Of course it's your story, so I'll leave the magic to you. Whatever it is I'm sure I'll fall off my chair laughing, since that's basically what I've been doing throughout the whole story! :) |
 Saiyan girl Gege 10/24/04 . chapter 1 Hey Sawnya I finally got around to readig this story (I don't see why I never did?)anyway I love this story I don't know if you will ever update it though so I might as well tell you now that it if finished it will recieve a 5 out of 5...now to clear some thigs up that a friend of mine thought of(this is for the people and Sawnya of course that have read my latest review of Hope Never Dies)what they pointed out was how my story that I plan to eventualy put on this site sounded like a copy of Sayna's fic Chestra..thats what I thought to when I first started to read it,but then I realized that it wasn't.I have been rewriting this story for 2to3 years now, it started out with a normal human girl being taken off Earth and forced to work for Frieza and eventually she fell in love with him but I began to "learn about new things"and my character ended up as a girl that wouldn't trust a man if her life depended on get the rest of the details about this you will have to read my story I'm not spoiling anything...oh yah I almost forgot that my storie isn't going to be like the review story thingy I did, not all dramatic and sad like it sounds(I hate those kinds of stories,but I was tired when I wrote it and it just came out that way)I'm currently working on adding some things to the storie and some of it I will need to E-mail you(Sawnya) adout, but that won't be until at the least until January2005 my computer sucks the best thing it could be used as is a boat ancor, so I'm getting a new one for
p.s. also in 2005 I (if I learn how)will be making a Frieza shrine to express my love to him and it wiil be a good shrine unlike all the ones that are out now(to the owners of those shrines,there not that bad but they could use some improvement)It will be a great day for us Frieza once again goodbye |
 Atramentua 4/5/04 . chapter 2XD This is PRICELESS! Keep going! |
 Augusta 3/1/04 . chapter 10Hee-hee. I luv it, when are you gonna update it? |
 Suzuka Blade 1/3/04 . chapter 9 Don Zaloog
"Don Zaloog" lets
you select a way to
punish opponents:
destroy one card
from their hand or
two from their deck. |
 Suzuka Blade 1/3/04 . chapter 9 Don Zaloog
"Don Zaloog" lets
you select a way to
punish opponents:
destroy one card
from their hand or
two from their deck. |
 Suzuka Blade 1/3/04 . chapter 9 Don Zaloog
"Don Zaloog" lets
you select a way to
punish opponents:
destroy one card
from their hand or
two from their deck. |
 Suzuka Blade 1/3/04 . chapter 8 Rope of Life
Use "Rope of Life"
to ressurect a
monster from your
graveyard-with
an extra 800 points
of ATK. |
 Suzuka Blade 1/3/04 . chapter 7 Guardian Sphinx
The
"Guardian Sphinx's"
ATK goes up to 2400
when you use it to
attack a card in
defensen position. |
 Suzuka Blade 1/3/04 . chapter 6 Helpoemer
"Helpoemer" is most
dangerous when it's
in the graveyard,
where it makes your
opponent discard
one card each turn. |
 Suzuka Blade 1/3/04 . chapter 6 Helpoemer
"Helpoemer" is most
dangerous when it's
in the graveyard,
where it makes your
opponent discard
one card each turn. |