I love the brotherly McGee/Tony interactions we don't get to see much n the show. This was classic, though, capturing their essences while leaving out the mean-spiritedness that the writers too often play up on Tv.

I love this little scene. I think you capture their characters perfectly. Also loved the Probie two shoes comment.

That was excellent, hilarious too. McGee's reactions throughout the entirely were classic.

great fic man! i would never have come across it if not for searching "endgame." usu only read tiva fics.

“And I’m afraid you signed up for the lifetime membership.” LOVE. What a perfect male bonding moment that I could totally see happening. Great job :)

I know it probably wasn't intended like this, but I could not stop giggling! Drunk Tony rambling about sexy assassians with shiny hair to the completely oblivious Tim... ah, I could so picture that.

Could you do one with Ziva? That would be equally funny, especially if he started rambling and she had no idea what he was talking about.

Very, very good :)

aww, that was cute. I loved the 'club'

I was thinking the exact same thing about Ziva bending over in front of Tony. If that wasn'ta sexual innuendo, I don't know what is!

Really great little piece! Not what I expected- usually I read 2 sentences or so and move on; this one held my interest because it was in canon, was written well (ie, using proper grammar and punctuation) and was a great and ORIGINAL story idea. Keep up the good work! Will check back in for more...

This was a great little story...Tony's drunken dialogue is excellent! I particularly liked this line: "You didn’t act surprised about the name of our club…and the fact that it implies that I…you know, have certain feelings for a certain ninja girl that are definitely not familial or exclusively friendly in nature." So perfect. Keep up the good work!

this is PERFECT. this is the exact kind of ending scene i was really hoping for and the show didn't deliver- such perfect timing! but, here you go, you wrote it. and your lines are SO perfect, WOW. like, exact dialogue, i can HEAR tony saying it over his drink! great great work! 3 i love your fic! :)

very good. I love the idea of a club, and McGee's line about the membership at the end D

awesome.

Nice job. I liked it a lot

This was awesome! You portrayed the characters perfectly. I love that McGee knows how Tony feels about Ziva, He is not as oblivious as Tony thinks. I was honestly quite confused about the big brother comment myself and this cleared things up a bit. Did you notice when Tony and Ziva were sitting at there desks and they were talking about McGee and Amanda were perfect for each other and Tony was like "if you are looking for that kind of thing" and then he smiles the cutest smile. Sighs... "oh be still my heart." Anyway I did enjoy this one shot very much please continue writing you are very good.