It's so good I want to cry now.

Love from France,

A. xx

I loved it and I so didn't see that one coming

Woah. Didn't see that coming. Consider my mind blown dude...

I liked it, only guessed it was Charlie and Billy in the 24th chapter.

All the emotions presented very well.

Kind of reminds me of the movie Brokeback Mountain.

This was amazing. So much emotion conveyed in so few words.

And good job with the pairing.

I had an inkling after the last chapter. You pulled it off really well.

B? La Push? This is interesting if its going where I think it might be...

Tribal drum in last chapter. Bonfire in this one. I'm thinking maybe Jacob and someone?

Hmmmm... *puts thinking cap on*

Okay. Now I'm really thinking it's two guys.

Or fuck buddies? Sooooo close to the end!

So, they're back to maybe being friends?

Awww. That's even worse that he had to actually see his love happy with someone new.

Favorite line: "I'd rather you be happy with someone else than miserable like I am."

Annnd, back to the sad. I'm dying to know who the couple is.

Ooh, I hope there's some revenge.