| Reviews for Not Yet |
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opicool 12/5/09 . chapter 1hahaha! this was very creative! and very fun to read :) |
shepweir always 11/16/09 . chapter 1 Fabulous story. Characters are right on. Cool how you included Astrid. Never had a clue she was the cute black woman at the bar. |
Viktorija 11/12/09 . chapter 1Well done! |
wjobsessed 11/12/09 . chapter 1lol Very clever, Xeen! Love that someone else is watching Bolivia's moves. Seemed very natural to have Astrid's character gay, as the actress who plays her is. I would LOVE to see another fic with these two ladies. Perhaps Alex spots them kissing, and Astrid owes her money for it? |
zeusfluff 11/11/09 . chapter 1Ha ha! This was a great story XC! I needed a good laugh. *Sigh* Peter and Olivia always playing hard to catch with each other... I hope you write another story like this soon! Thanks so much, ZeusFluff P.S. I also have a story in the Fringe section as well if you'd like to take a look at it. It's called: Insecurities and Unknown Realities. Feel free to let me know what you think! Thanks! |
Ocein 11/11/09 . chapter 1AW that was cute and I like your portrayal of Astrid! Care to do a follow up? |
bearlee-there 11/11/09 . chapter 1"His hands started to draw in the air complicated patterns of their own." They're always on the move, aren't they? Well, that didn't go quite where I expected. Love the bit between Alex and Astrid. Good job, you little tease. |