| Reviews for: Birthday Girl |
 Steph Bee 12/26/11 . chapter 1 Whoooo! I like it! Very realistic but sexy! Amazing taste in scenery and setup, as well as a lively conversation between the man and woman of the hour XD Fantastic! |
 hklfh 12/17/11 . chapter 1 This is so cute...its perfect and I love it. |
 Laryna6 10/25/10 . chapter 1It's not just that this fic is made of adorable, it's all the character dynamics.
Protoman's descriptions of Wily's choices especially. That they are all still a family, split apart or not, and how that still affects Wily even in his madness.
The very fact that he knew Kalinka's dream, her heart's desire, and gave it to her? The amount of understanding that involves?
This very real sense of caring pervades the entire fic, love in all its forms (except the terrible ones), warm and real and there. Despite wars and species barriers. It's frankly beautiful. |
 Jikoken'o 11/12/09 . chapter 1Ah! This is a very interesting pair. I've never considered them, but now that I've read this, they really make sense! What a cute piece. I enjoy your oneshots quite a bit. I like how you write Proto Man's personality, it's exactly how I pictured it. He's not really 'cold', persay, he's just a bit unsocial.
As usual, your descriptions and choice of words are very good. You are a very good writer. Thank you for sharing this adorable ficlet! :) |
 Shadow Fox777 11/12/09 . chapter 1Now these two, are so cute. I gotta say, I like it. |
 shadowneko003 11/11/09 . chapter 1kawaii!
And the Forte x Roll was funny. |
 ThatFanFicGuy 11/11/09 . chapter 1oh, this is cute. so cute, I was almost able to ignore that little bit of BassxRoll in the middle. keyword: almost.
oh well, this was perfect! you are freaking awesome or something to be able to write something as sweet and cavity inducing as this! |
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