AMAZING plot, but fastly in not a word and this story needs a lot more adjectives. Show the story, not tell. Describe things! Imagine you ARE the character and think about the many things around you and the emotions you're feeling! It was really dull, but the plot was just so good I had to read the entire story.

Sequel? Pls? I loved this story.

I liked It until this chapter D: I mean ppl say u should nvr end a story in the way of: ' and he woke up and it was all a dream' ahem no offence

but either than de last chappie it was good I guess :/

ok, i have nothing more to say. i get that this is your story, but come on, isn't there something else you wanted to do with it? first you add another conflict out of nowhere, leave the first conflict hanging as if it doesn't matter, and then you take the "it was all a dream" cop out? this was a really good story up until ch 5! what happened? did you adopt this story from someone and try to take it in a new direction? was there a major alteration in your persepctive for some reason? what happened? where did the tense, dramatic, emotionally (and sexually) charged rape story go? what the fuck happened to it! i wanna finish it!

ok, so we're migrating into semi-reasonable slash somewhat sane territory. at least we're back to two human beings with rights, opinions, voices and the power to choose instead of one sicko with an obsession treating the object of his insanity like his property. so the quesiton now is, is sasuke going to do any more illegal things? personally the whole getting back together thing would be out of the question if it were me, but in this case i just think naruto just needs to reevaluate his roll in this relationship and start thinking about taking sasUKE back instead of sasuke-teme.

sure, comfort your frightened, betrayed and violated significant other by chaining them up, imprssioning them and beating them into submission. because that'll fix everything!

ummmmm, guys! wtf? you do know this is rape, assault and kidnap (in that order) don't you? i mean really, don't you? personally i would have called the cops from the hotel, but i know that being betrayed in that way can be kinda confusing, and it can be hard to admit that the person you care about has actually hurt you that badly, so many people don't call immediately because they don't really wanna admit it. still shika and sasgay are really crossing a new line here. and believe me, this territory is far form relationship repairing.

well this is exibiting all the signs of an abusive relationship. sasuke-teme, here's a tip, if you're not concerned with whether your partner comes or not, then this is not a healthy encounter.

omg naruto need therapy!

oh man i would have been screamin for police and try to hit them in the nutz!

omg poor you and naru go to hell now sasu and shika i loved you both but now...ugh your the worst!1nice job on this hey it was writh all that time!

This was a really nice story! Although I thought the last chapter was like a bomb in the toilet because I hate it when something bad happens and then it actually was a dream :/

Sequel... Sequel... Please update the sequel as fast as you can!

You know?

You're really good at making hurt/comfort chapters, especially naruto fanfic

Make another story like this, and I'll absolutely read it!

Hey you know what? I was also 13.

Nice story!