Good and hot for a first time! I want more!

I agree with sasuke...

steamy!

Don't worry, it was hot.

Lol! Naruto can be SO slow on the uptake! Heh

Not bad for a first lemon. It can only get better! Geez, Sasuke can't keep it in his pants. Naruto was actually scared. XD

But he sure stopped caring. About the house, that is. Sasuke made him care about something else :D

I hope Naruto comes to terms with being gay fast!

SASUKE WON'T LET HIM REST!

Siblings: So...Sasuke is horny in both real life, AND in stories?

Curse: And in both, he's together with Naruto?

Both: *Shakes head* Poor Naru-kun...

I'm with Sasuke. That was hot. :)

Sexy, hot and super awesome.

Ahahahahahaha! Naruto would realize that AFTER they have sex! Lol

Lol I finally got around to rereading this. Cant believe this was your first lemon, good job! Heh sasuke is pretty forward isnt he, going straight for the kill almost immediately like that. I mean obvious gay naruto is obvious gay, except to himself, who better to show him than smexy sasuke. Anyways im bored so i think ill go through your stories in chrono order now kthnxbye :3

For you first lemon it was awesome. I myself thought my first lemon sucked, but others didn't think so. Anyway your was really good :D

xoxo HinaKicksAss

it was awesome!

ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!

I loved how innocent Naruto was, going through this sort of thing for the first time with another boy – he was soo cute!

And to balance his cuteness, Sasuke was SEXY! His confidence was hot but you could also tell that he cared about making Naruto as comfortable as possible

So the sex was just 100% pure hotness! I loved every word!

And lol at the end XD

We all know Naruto liked it rough :P

EXCELLENT JOB!

Hand lotion in a nearby drawer? How convinient. Still, not bad for a first timer lemon writer. *wipes away nosebleed trickle*

Ohh! That was your fisrt lemoon! i never would have guessed it was so good and as Sasuke said Hot XD *dies from bloodloss*

I love it! It's was great!