I cant believe you racked yourself out so much over a fiction, but all your hard work paid off. this story felt like episodes of the show. ) It was really well thought out, I liked how you built little ideas but let the reader decide to consider them, its a safe but effective approach. I dont normally read tenshi fictions but this one is an exception. very nice love,

Yuki-chan. How many times did I have to tell you the old one was fine? lol But your changes are good, and this is a much better fic than it was when you first wrote it. I hope you're finally happy with it now. Keep up the good work. I wish I was your editor when you wrote this the first time. lol

Very nice. The fanfic equivalent of comfort food. WAFFy to the max. Which is good. :)

DDX, the reason you don't see many Tenchi/Washu or Tenchi/Mihoshi fics is that those are pretty far-fetched outcomes. And for some reason, most of the people who make claims like yours, that T/R fics are all lacking in imagination, usually go on to heavily praise other, quite bad fics, for no other reason than that they're not T/R.

Yet another t/r fic. I personally resent these types because noone has any always either r/t a/t .the others get writen about but only half heartedly. try writing something else

Kawaii *-*! Please post the next chapter soon, it is so good! I was praying he would choose Ryoko, I am a rt fan! I love your fiction, please continue!

Nice ending! It was nice change of pace of seeing Tenchi choosing down to Mother and Daughter. Maybe a sequel in the works for T/R and maybe also Washu/Yosho?

It was beautiful, I loved it. I loved the part with Washu, sad and well written with her emotions. You write like Silver.

I loved this chapter!

that was sweet, keep up the good work.

That was nice, i look forward to the next chapter.

Write more! Please write more!-Tarren

Thank you, everyone for your kind words! I tell you, writing this seems more worth-while knowing that you all at least like it! I hope you aren't disappointed with the last chapter, which is coming soon!

Nice scene with Washu, but now I want to see how does Tenchi navigates the

incoming storm called Ayeka.

Hey, This is Really good! I like it alot. Outside of Ayeka's attitude, this is almost like it came strait from a Tenchi cartoon! That's a really good sign, for an author, if it seems authentic. It's almost like being a part of it. And Ryoko is very well portrayed.