It's always the small gestures that count. Lovely fic

I love it :-)

I love this story so much, eventhough I cannot understand Natsuki's line "Even if they were a boy". Did she meant that if a girl tried to touch her, she'll beat them up for sure?

You should write a longer story, with the kind of feeling that is transpired in this one. I like the pace and how you build up the tension here ;)

Nice and cute! I like it.

That was lovely, and true to the characters as I see them. Thanks for sharing it.

*melts* Omg this was so sweet! I loved it! Thanks so much for sharing D

Wonderful. Simply wonderful. You've really captured a deep sense of guilt for Shizuru, one that I think fits well with her character. Not sure about the Natsuki liking it from the start bit, but I think that's open to interpretation from the show.

Very nice, well-developed piece. Thank you.