Wow, this is just wow! Beautiful and dark, amazing job! XD

I loved this. Yami Marik is like a dream. And really, this couple is awesome, it makes the dark pretty.

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Loved this to bits - so dark, beautiful wrapped in one perfect story.

I love this one - really dark.

Whoa - darkness all over! Hot!

I loved this to death! Made me hot and bothered a little bit.

Whoa...nice work.

"She comes to him and closes her eyes….

Leaning in to feel his smooth lips against her own….

Feeling his satisfied sigh upon her neck….

Before she kisses him softly…"

Whoa...those words stuck with after I read this.

Hot yet very disturbing.

Another great drabble featuring this twisted couple. Make more, onegai!

Whoa - so beautifully written. I know this couple might not be an audiemce favorite, but it's tops in my book.

Very interesting. I like the last few lines. Really puts it into perspective.

TDH

Stupendous - I'll give you an A!

I love it - so dark, so mysterious, so ominous! Two thumbs up!

Very Beautiful. Quite inspiration. I love your use of imagery and was quite sad once I reached the last line.

Thank you for this magnificent poem.

-NuitSongeur

Nice!:)