That was a very good story

i've experienced something very similar to that, from both amelia and lina's perspective and so i can relate. it was well written, even as it was twisted.

I know your pain. I had a friend do this to me too... I played Amelia as well. *hugs tight* I think... the only thing we can do is just let them go. it hurts, but it's their life they're messing up.

also, I think this is proof that X/L would never work L/G all the way, yo!

Dang, that was hella cool. _ Even though Lina's my favorite character, it's nice to see Amelia finally take a stand against her. Go Amelia! :D Interesting take on the relationships. I think this could be a possibility in a Slayers AU.

ohmygod. another BEAUTIFUL and VERY sad fic from Lina Inverse the Dramata! YOu rock SOOO much! I LUV YER FICS! and it was really good how you fit what was happening into the lyrix. (true story? sad.)

very good story.

ja!

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Wow...that was very well written, but depressing. Normally I don't like alternate couplings (because I really hate L/Z, but I do like L/X, as long as it doesn't interfere with A/Z) but this was good, noticed a bit of A/Z there yay!

I thought it was good

Hey... it's me. Nicely written. Not much else to say... Keep writing. You rule.

Well all that hurt and anger kept Amelia in character .. Awesome fic. Dun worry, I've been through this scenario too

Very good story, the writting style was excellent, as usual _ This was really a good story, and you didn't get the chars OOC too much, if at all, it was very slight. btw, did you write the song/ poem that goes along with it? If it has a tune, I'd like to know. Mebbe if I sang it to one of my friends (who is going through something like this) she'd get what I've been trying to tell her. ::sigh:: Anyway, nice fic!

That was very well writen and something most worth while to read. I can't wait to read more of your stories sometime _

i like this story *sniffle* and the song/poem parts..

Yeouch. I am totally against Lina/Xellos fics, but WOW this was amazing. Riveting. You write very well.

it's just a jump to the left

and a step to the right

put your hands on your hips

and bring your knees in real tight

oh yeah, the story was... yeah

Wow! That's an angsty and crafty one! I could see your side of the story and her side of the story. This is a really good one. Poor Lina... poor Amelia. Both of them are right, but both of them are wrong. I totally understand.