|Reviews for What We Become|
| Hollywithaneye 11/19/09 . chapter 7
Oh Crisium, you are evil! married!Alistiar? But then, if he doesn't how will our darling Therrin ever end up with Cullen? ;)
I hope I have told you lately how much I love this story, and how excited I am to see someone writing about Cullen. From the moment I met him stammering in the halls of the Circle I knew I'd have a soft spot for him.
As always, a job well done with the dialogue. And I loved the descriptions of Greagoir. This line "Greagoir sighs and gives into the urge to rub his temples, trying not to think that he has felt old for more years than he ever expected to be alive." Says it all.
| WysdomsGirl 11/19/09 . chapter 6
This. Is so. Fantastic! The brief glimpse of Cullen/Female Mage given in game really captured my imagination, and this well-written fic is SO satisfying on a number of counts. Wynne and Oghren are spot-on; Cullen and the PC are delightful. I can't wait to read more!
| Quiess 11/18/09 . chapter 6
Excellent so far. I found the whole Cullen character to be intriguing when I played through, and had always wished it had been further explored, but I suppose thats what Fanfiction is for, eh? Suffice to say, I'm greatly relieved I found this story and hope you continue to update it.
A brilliant 'sequel' to a brilliant game.
| Vic Sage 11/18/09 . chapter 6
Yes. Just... Yes. If you stop writing this I will be most displeased.
| LadyRev 11/18/09 . chapter 6
Oh gawd, the hilarity 3 Can't wait to read more!
| Ballerina.Embers 11/18/09 . chapter 6
Oh God... And I mean, Oh Gawwd. Oh Lawd... Why do I like this so much? Oh yes, I know!
Because it's amazing. Keep it up.
| VoiDreamer 11/18/09 . chapter 6
Lol...this was fantastic! Oh Oghren...I love the fact that all the Templars seem totally incapable of holding him back from saying his mind :) I loved it - funniest chapter thus far!
| alyak 11/18/09 . chapter 6
This chapter was hilarious! Gotta love Oghren.
| Nemolicious 11/18/09 . chapter 6
Wow. You did a great job with Oghren. Simply fantastic. Write faster, damnit.
| Bladesworn 11/18/09 . chapter 6
Crisium, you win so hard at life. XD Moar pls. :D
| TheLostMinstrel 11/18/09 . chapter 6
Brilliant once again. Oghren's amazing in this and its simply hilarious and as for his Cullen - baiting, first time in a brothel indeed. I wonder when Oghren realises that Amell may actually want him to really be nice to a certain templar. The rest are asses. Great, I do hope that Dagna gets into the Circle and if nothing else she could help with handling the lyrium after all if the templars are addicted and mages use it perhaps she nag Gregoir from there. Can't wait to read more.
| lyricangell 11/18/09 . chapter 6
I LOVED this chapter! I was laughing out loud, literally, through this entire thing! You captured Oghren 100%! You know what? I'm done with this review, I need to go back and read that chapter again...
| Sayle 11/18/09 . chapter 4
Game. I meant game. Aie. Thinking about two things while typing sometimes makes you put down the wrong thought.
| Sayle 11/18/09 . chapter 6
Oh, good grief. I would say this is veering perilously close to humour, but the fact of the matter is Oghren is actually like that. I had a misfortune of being in a fairly quiet part of the girl when he struck up a conversation with Alistair using euphemisms I have never even heard of before, and in all honestly, never want to hear again.
Still, a brilliant change of view. Let's be honest, though, the Templars either had it coming or don't get enough characterisation as people...solving one in a single fell swoop is quite an accomplishment. I can understand if you didn't actually have that in mind - but it came out that way anyway, and it came out very well indeed.
Keep up the good work. I say that because you need encouragement, like a puppy or some sort of intelligent animal doing tricks. Because, yanno. Writers aren't /people/.
| A Violet Wonder 11/18/09 . chapter 6
Amazing fic! I love what you've done with the character of Cullen. And Oghren made me laugh hysterically.