Great story. I love her moxie in fighting back. I like the open ending. But I'll alert in case you return.
Thanks.

nice

i didnt liek that he seemed sos talkerish. he should have been more careful

more please

Yeah, that was cute. :-) Thank you.

That was one of the lovelist, sweetest and quite beautifully take on the Twilight canon. I enjoyed every chapter - I particularly enjoyed your characterisation of Bella. The fact that she was a shield (both in her thought and blood scent) was an interesting take but most of all, I liked how you ended the story. It was so fitting and apt. Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us.

Great little story! I really enjoyed it.

Thanks!

I loved this story. It was interesting how Edward couldn't smell Bella. I loved how determined Edward was to find what Bella had been writing and I loved how Bella took the taser home. Great story! :D

Quite interesting idea, that Edward couldn't smell Bella... That would put the Twilight saga on some completely different level ;)

Thanks for the entertaining! :)

Great book! Please update soon!

Hey, I just now read this sweet little story, liked your spin on this Bella/Edward! What an interesting way to set them up! and truly no further story is necessary, unless you decide to write it, it stands on it's own. Love how Bella would take home a taser! That was lovely! and Edward working so hard to find her journal so that he could find out what she was thinking, just like any teenage boy - perfectly done! Thanks for this - ;)

nice one, though she is a bit harsh

That was a beautiful story! I loved it.

Ah, young love - so awkward and painful...

Just found the story - I love it so far!