Nice! More Please!

M... Yummy. -smirk-

What I think? Sexy hot... possibly needs a napkin warning at the beginning. :P

Damn, that was hot

The smut was pretty good.

I thought it moved a bit fast...I mean Severus Snape proclaiming love after one time? I dunno. But then again nothing for his point of view so it's possible?

It was cute though.

Well done

A very well done first smut scene! It was hot and sweet at the same time. Please write more, I want to know what happens next, be it the next day or year, I don't care, the more the better!