As always, an awesome job dude.

Another great chapter. I can't wait for the next update

Everyone parts ways, and now the beginning of a new adventure. This was an amazing story, Phantom. And it makes me happy that Hope was able to get to the quarterfinals! I'll be waiting for the next torunament someone puts up. I'll read Lord of Darkness because you're so good. Thanks for this great story.

nice story man, it wwas great. tell me if your doiing another one like this.

nice job. hope to see more of Kyla.

bTW have u heard of Kamen Rider?

And that's the end of that. Hopefully Kyla will set her life back on course. Despite the fact a few things weren't explained (such as why Freak acted funny during his match and why the ball kept stopping in midair in Tanya's), it was a typical happy ending. Next, Lord of Darkness. Start working on it please

Good luck to Kyla in the near future. Hopefully she can find her parents and rebuild her life with them. As for the others, good luck with them, too. This was a pretty good tournament story. I await your next.

Kyla's history is revealed, and now, with a change of heart, she makes new friends. I'm happy for her. Can't wait for the conclusion for this story.

So beautiful! I guess Kyla sees Louise as a surrogate mother or something. Wonder what will occur in the epilogue. Update soon

Tough to hear what happened to Kyla. Abusive parents, poverty...pretty much everything. And to think that Zed pretended to be nice just to get what he wanted. Hopefully things will be better for her in the future. I await the epilogue.

Not to be nitpicky, you are a good author, but you really seemed to overuse the word "electric" and the phrase "human like creature(s)". Normally I'd ignore any repetiton, but in this chapter it wasrathr tedous, and took away from the general effect.

Just throwing that out there. Otherwise I liked the chapter :)

So what's next?

In your face, eel monster! Good use of the other players taking part in the fight. One more chapter to go I'm guessing. Update soon

Oh man! What an intense battle! It took everything they had, but the heroes managed to defeat Zythris once and for all. Amazing story, can't wait for the conclusion.

Cool fight, with the heroes working together to finally defeat the beast. Looks like Zed's down for the count. I wonder what'll happen to Kyla now? She did land the final blow to that light that was creating the projectiles. I await the next chapter.