All your pokemon fanfictions so far have been so bitter and evil... Yet they're so good...

I remember reading this back in 2002. It's odd how your taste evolves over time, and I can see why you'd want to sweep this one under the rug now.

I guess no matter what you do, your earlier work will always be somewhat embarrassing given enough time. I'm not going to leave any constructive criticism because this is almost eight years old and I'm sure you no longer care about anything this old and are aware of most of the shortcomings of such an early work anyway. But, it was nice to read this again just for nostalgia's sake.

Cheerful as always, Miss Farla.

Very different to your usual pokemon POVs but it was really cool and original.

It deserved more reviews.

I don't get why you didn't put this story into chapters, as it wold have spaced things out a little easier...

I don't blame Maelstrom for being confused at the end. I didn't really get the talk about humans containing pokemon powers. Doesn't that mean Wildfire will die soon, since she has the power of fire? From the perspective at the end, it looks like Maelstrom went insane with her desire to kill Wildfire and Ice...I feel kind of bad for her. Good story though, pretty dark, even for you.

Kita

ps: What's up with that "how many of you actually know what that means?" remark? Don't treat your readers like they're idiots.

One of your better fics, but terribly confusing.

You have an Ice in at least 2 other fics, they all seem different, please explain Ice, and Wildfire, actually.

You should stick to oneshots, you're better at those.

Good use of description and well written.

As for dark types, WHO THINKS THEY'RE EVIL? WHO?

Honestly, no one does. I love dark types. (See Geratina, though, it's scary...) I must stop reading/reviewing, now.

I have an account to upload stories... But your fics are amazing, if in stark contrast to the game/anime.

Please continue writing great fics. (And don't write several at once, okay? It helps, honestly.)

definately different. i think it's great! i can't wait to read the others!

Nice flick. A little darker then I am used to but still good. Please submit the other two rocket ficks about Ice and Wildfire. I would like to read them. I would like to know the origins of two of the Revolution characters.

YESSSSS! SUBMIT MORE! I WANT MOREEEEE!

Farla, Great story. Can you go to fandomination and look for my name? I will be posting a background to Wildfire so can you read it? Hope it doesn't ofend you,thanks

Psychic195

Umbreons really learn PSYCHIC, but because of their weak especial attack it doesn’t do much harm

Oh well is just a fanfic…

Ouch. VERY dark. VERY CLASS. I wrote Wildfire as a more nervous character in PokeRevolution. Silly me... Oh, BTW, when are ya putting up chapter 8 of POKEMON REVOLUTION? Jennies couldn't use guns? Odd that.

I am in shock. That was incredible. I really need to read Wildfire and Ice now. Yow.

Kick ass, man! That was great! I especially loved the end. "If I will that something burn, it burns." That is so cool! _ It's great that you explained Ice and Wildfire's origins. Can't wait to see more from you! And Revolution is great. Keep it up, Farla!

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