Enjoyed the Shrek reference. And I thought it was very sweet and very Alistair.

It's so cute. I wish Alistair would have taken some sort of initiative instead of the warden having to speak up. You still kept his character like him though and I think that's important to keep it like that. :)

Yay something happy... fluffy and happy and I don't know why that can't happen in the bloody game. "You want me, you gotta have her too"... see easy peasy. Let's hope DA3 gives us that opportunity.

Thank you

Naomi xxx

That is absolutely the EXACT ending I wanted for the game. Call me a sap, but after romancing sweet, adorable Alistair, NOTHING would have made me happier than this outcome, not because I particularly wanted my character to be queen, but solely for the romantic aspect. Very well done, I enjoyed it immensely.

Alistair is so sweet here :) Really good.

Just found this, LOVED it!

That is incredibly sweet. And how I had imagined my writeup for when I finally hit the landsmeet in my fic. :)

My teeth just fell out. Thanks for such a lovely fic!

Haha, yeah, not what I'm used to so far in the DA fanfiction universe. At all. But it's good to see it turn out right sometimes. With the game, I don't really disagree with how they handled Alistair becoming king and how it affected his relationship with the other Warden. A relationship between two very different races or classes, in what's basically the medieval age...makes sense. But at the same time, this story makes a very good argument for how they could have fought the norm and maybe even won. While the people might've had issues with cross-race/class relationships, they might also have issues with the big hero and heir to the throne being pushed aside for a backstabber. All in all, you pulled it off pretty damn well.

GOSH I AM SO TORN first of all the footprints in the blood so so awesome just the perfect touch of gravity to this otherwise fluffy fic and anyway ONTO THE SQUEEING

I AM TORN

BECAUSE

ON THE ONE HAND, I AM FILLED WITH ELATION (omg omg YES yes of course that's exactly how Alistair would say it and he's so IC and the mage is so nervous and disbelieving and then happy and omg yes yes YES) BUT ALSO WITH CRUSHING DESPAIR (because it will NEVER ACTUALLY HAPPEN, THIS IS NOT HOW IT HAPPENS IN THE GAME, YOU CANNOT BE SO LUCKY IN THE GAME), and then I go back to elation (OMG SO PERFECT 3) and then even more despair (IN THE GAME HE'S JUST, LIKE, NO SORRY, THE NOBLES WON'T APPROVE) and I just.

sob.

I love this. So, so much. Because Alistair DOES need someone to rule beside him and the excuses the game gives for the mage are so inadequate and-and-brb, sobbing while smiling forever.

oooh soo cute! *_* that's my Alistair and that's EXACTLY as it should have been if anyone wants death, despair and tragedy, they could turn the TV on and watch the news or something...

Really, that's far more in-character of Alistair than this crap, he said in the game right after the Landsmeet blub...

so just in case you haven't get it yet: I like this little fluff-excursion - thank you :3

WHY am I only reading this now? Oh, so sweet. I wish this could have been an option - it makes so much sense, and would have saved me from hating Alistair. ;_;

I think as desperate as the nobility was at this point, this totally would have worked for an option in the game. The dumping by Alistair at the Arl's estate is always so hard to take. Thanks for writing this fluffy little gem.

Aweeeeee!

You were right... it really does rot one's teeth. Damn;)

Thank you for this !

So sweet... Its hard to wipe out the big happy grin from my face.