I loved this tale! You were spot on with your characters, I love Lois, she was a treat. You have a talent and thanks for sharing.

what a lovely and great story! i just read at once! loved it! thanks for writing, I really enjoyed so much!

I am enjoying this very much so far. Your writing is very enjoyable and a pleasure to read.

I love Lois and am so happy that Harry has found a Muggle adult who is concerned for him and actually likes him. It always stretched credibility to the limit in canon, that the adults (who are not family) who are in contact with Harry-his teachers for example-were never concerned for his obviously neglected state. That they sided with the Dursleys and their obviously bullying son when tales of Harry's delinquency were spread far and wide is unbelievable. Aren't these people supposed to have some insight into children and their behaviour? So, yay Lois!

I am looking forward to more.

Lesley

This was an amazing story. I honestly don't tend to really like stories with non-canon characters but Lois was a fantastic person and I like the way you've portrayed her and used her to build the story. Thanks for the fantistic work and the time you've put into this to shar this:)

just for the sake of reviewing..love the chapter

i love this story..thank you so much

Thank you! I love seeing happy endings even knowing the journey is rarely easy. You have managed to keep the characters and situations realistic, despite being AU. I enjoyed the entire journey tremendously!

Constructive criticism: If you have a word processing program, have it run grammar as well as spell check. Then you can cut and paste it into whatever format is necessary for downloading your story. That way, if you have used an incorrect word (sounds the same but spelled differently), it will be brought to your attention faster.

Thank you for sharing your gifted talents!

Well, I read this story totally by mistake, I normally don't read anything that doesn't have Harry as one of the maincharacters and I guess I only read the summary hear. I don't like fluff, stories like this one I usually stop reading after a few chapters as I just plain bored. Guess they are more for girls;)

Even all this I still read trough it all, can't realy say why but the plot got me reading on and it is very well written. Good work! You managed to get me trough the whole story, never thought I would read a story like this in here.

Personally my dice gives you a weak 4. Objectivly I would guess you deserve a good 5...:)

Thank you for writing such a beautiful story - i have always loved snape and he go the raw end of the deal in the books - i would hope you keep writing and if you ever do harry ginny or continue with this series please let me know

excellent story. loved it all :)

nice

Oh yay. THat makes me smile

LOL! I love her character!

Sweet Circe, I absolutely loved this story! I'm generally wary of stories centering on OCs but this one was fabulous- probably one of the best Severus/OC fics I've ever read. Thanks for such a great read; bravo!

I absolutely LOVED this story. Although I'm not the biggest fan of Snape, I do like seeing him in a nice role. A wife and kids? It was great!