Yo! I'm Hikaru am a newbie here...

Your story is cool but I want to see more Tsuna/Cielo parts but I'm just saying It's your choice after all

In anyway I'll support you all the way so good luck and write more cool stories

Jyaa nee

Interesting O.O

i hope you continue this fiction XD it's dark and interesting... ja!

sabrina-chan xoxo

This sounds very interesting! Please update!

There are a lot of commas throughout the story that aren't really needed. There's the occasional spelling or grammar mistake but those can easily be overlooked. Interesting story. Im looking forward to the next update.

I like this story

it's a bit dark but I like it

hope you continue to update though see you ciaö

The story is awesome :)

update soon.. .

I really like this story. I do. And I don't like many KHR stories, so good job and THANK YOU!
Update soon!

MiAquaN

BAH! MEANIE! THAT WAS A MEAN CLIFFY! I need to know what happens now... seriously... Awesome story though, I'm not a fan of OC's but yours are actually pretty good. One thing I'd suggest is somehow separating when you're changing who's point of view with like a dash or page line because it got confusing, still awesome. Need update though _

Great chapter! And great story altogether! Also just wondering when are you going to update your story Genaration XI?

what? you only fourteen? You're doing great job! b
I'll wait for your update soon, remember, dont push youself to hard v

Another flame? What color is it I am curious of finding out.

awesome plotline so far
only thing is that for some reason i cant read this chapter... (ch9)though its probably just something wrong with the encoding on ...

eg. "text-align:center;" b Truth 01 /b /p p style "text-align:center;" b . /b /p p style "text-align:center;" b . /b /p p style "text-align:center;" i Words are but symbols for the relations of things to one another /i /p p style "text-align:center;"

is what im reading o.o

I luv ur story! Keep writing for the sake of all ur readers (including me ;D)! D