Wow. Really cool! I think it is the nicest poem I have ever read... Is it OK if I print it and get me and a freind 2 read 2 our class?

I liked the style of the it went back and forth between two people,and sometimes they talked together. I don't know what else to say, except good luck on future stories and poems!

I like it. Dark and well written.

um...okay...that was wierd...

that was good i really like the colors, and even though it was short it had substance

This one was written by both Ali and I. We felt like writing a poem, and we were in the library, and we both like Animorphs, so this came out. It's not only about Controllers, it COULD be about real people too ... (Yes, I know I've just posted the same review four different times on the same poem that was posted four different times ... ;-))