I like it nice plot you have going on here!

Interesting story, I like it so far! I wonder what Anakin saw, and what will happen next!

Yup, I'm a little confused, but I can't wait for more!

A good start here. I like the concept, as far as I know of it, but can't help feeling that the way Anakin speaks is off. He is very down to earth and isn't nearly as eloquent a speaker as Obi Wan, so maybe dumb him down some. That isn't to say Anakin is dumb, not at all, he is just not into using 'big' words except maybe when talking about the mechanicals of his xwing!

Wow. I'm hanging on the edge of my seat! And it's only the second chapter!

Interesting start! Please continue :)

Cooleo