|Reviews for fading away|
| Hannah 4/25/12 . chapter 12
Wow. Just... wow. Probably the best, most complex fix i have ever read. So creative. If I'm understanding correctly, the whole story with Akatsuki was the dream, and their life in suna was the reality. Very interesting twist :)
| Hannah 4/24/12 . chapter 4
I just love the style of writing. Very... artistic. I actually think you did a really great job making the whole situation clear. Showing the developing relationship between Sakura and Sasuke through the little snippets of conversation and telling pieces of Sakura's dreams. I also like that you have changed sakura's character from being the short-tempered, kick-ass medical ninja to someone more vulnerable, who is kind of lost in herself. I really love it so far!
| Chiruno-Chan 4/3/12 . chapter 12
I love this story! It's just so great.
I loved the short extra scene you added with Sakura and Sasuke it was just soooo cute!
I got the ending after having to go read it again, LOL!
You really are a good writer, this story was great!
I wish you luck in future stories!
| iSchlumpy 3/18/12 . chapter 12
OMG so it was all a dream! Omg this is my favourite fic now and I can't stand how underrated this is! This deserves more than what it got! I was mindfvcked. It's 4am I didn't sleep until I finished this xD sorry for not leaving reviews on every chapter but you do deserve it though, sorry cause I'm on phone right now, ya know can't be bothered to waste my iPhone's battery xD
Anyway gosh I never would've thought that the 'dreams' were actually the reality! But you did left a clue, I can remember :p when Sasuke told Sakura that MAYBE our dreams are actually the 'real life' and the real life we are living are actually the dream. Which is exactly what this fic is about — I admit it made me think at first, but shame on myself, I thought it was just some added beauty or quote and stuff. Oh, I am probably not making sense, well I'm sleepy, after all — I didn't sleep. Not until I finished this.
Finished reading this whole fic in 3 hours. Not satisfied though, wish I could've done better.
You are a mindfvcker, btw. Hate you xD loljk. Oh and I like Kisame's character here, it's such a pity he 'died' and yep yep he was super kind!
K ill stop! XD
| sasusaku 4 evs 2/6/12 . chapter 12
SAD! BUT AMAZING! *THUMPS UP*
| ju1i3Oh 2/5/12 . chapter 12
| kenzinator 1/21/12 . chapter 12
This story was so amazing! I absolutely loved it! :)
| DiamondDreams789FIFi 1/15/12 . chapter 12
A sad but wonderful ending. I really enjoyed your fanfiction, even though it wasn't such a happy ending
| Sadistic Nightmare 12/30/11 . chapter 12
Wow this is wow... I'm sad that it ended so well sad but it's still very good, love how you can make sasuke open up but stil be in character. The ending on both stories was amazing! So sad and angst but amazing!
| medstudent1026 12/25/11 . chapter 12
imma been mine faqed!
| OlivineWK 12/24/11 . chapter 12
And the whole time I thought it was the other way around...maybe the use of justsus should have been enough of a hint. But anyway, nicely done... I really enjoyed reading the small scenes here and there.
| Shubhs 12/11/11 . chapter 1
AW YOU DEDICATED A STORY TO ME. I will read it. Definitely. If not today, then at the maximum, within this month. XD :)
| foreversnow 12/8/11 . chapter 12
I loved this story so much! It totally blew me away.
| vwaterlily 11/25/11 . chapter 12
This was a wonderful story! I couldn't stop reading once I started :) I would have said something about a bit of OOCness but it was only slight and you definitely captured most of Sasuke's personality well. I found the ending slightly predictable, but this is probably because I read everything in one go and one line stood out to me (the one where you later said you meant as a foreshadowing), the one about what if the dreams are real life and if this life was a dream. However, the story was great and nothing changes me opinion of this. :)
| jowilleatyuh 11/12/11 . chapter 12
This... fanfiction was... okay... It definitely qualifies to be one of the most awkward AU fanfictions I have ever read xD It's not bad... but normally AU fictions don't...erm... include shinobi things in it... Like remove the fire breathing and all that jazz- it's unnecessary... Also, many of the scenes were fairly abrupt and it somewhat caused the chapter to be fairly boring. I don't mean to flame your fanfiction, because it was good in some ways, but just try to... not make some of it seem so awkward? O.o Ermm... the test subject and all that stuff? Isn't that more of Oro? o.o And the possibility of Sasuke and the Akatsuki being ANYWHERE related on even an acquaintance level... Meh personally, I believe that you should have stated that the Akatsuki was a company.. For most of the story, I thought that the Akatsuki was a private drug selling gang and stuff... I don't know . The general plots of Itachi giving Sakura to Sasuke and then taking her back, drugging her, losing her memory, Sasuke trying to make her remember- I like that- But there were most definitely several awkward areas with adding in the shinobi stuff. Grr this is sounding more of a flame... meh I suck at giving "constructive criticism" Okay putting it short, I'd probably rate this a 4/10 because of the jumble and all of that stuff- It's still a decent-good story overall, so don't be let down if you read this :p