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| Reviews for Delinquent |
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   SweetGumdrop 4/26/13 . chapter 1Not as hot as the ShikaAsuma earlier but certainly cute. I like. :) |
| Yuma yusagi 4/3/13 . chapter 1 Will this be continued. Plz continue it. Plz? |
| andysanime 1/31/13 . chapter 1 Really good job on this one-shot, loved it 3 |
| Vein's Simply Tired 1/9/13 . chapter 1 Is this plot with sex or sex with plot, lol whatever, love this, thank you for making this xD |
| ConteurCG 1/3/13 . chapter 1 You're far too talented. Another excellent story. |
| UchihaNaruTeme4 11/27/12 . chapter 1 lol interesting. "Grab your junk, Sasuke." The Uchiha nodded solemnly and began to unbutton the hooks at his crotch. Naruto flung a stapler at him. "GAH! Not THAT you PERVERT!" lmao XD This was cute, the humor was a bit more light hearted than others I've read from you. Love the last three lines in this story! Love the uchiha's quick wit. It's amazing what hes doing for his 'rats' hes a very kind young man. And imagining Naruto is a police uniform is nosebleed worthy.-just saying-we all know it. On to another... |
| Akuma-shi-ko 10/8/12 . chapter 1 Damn, that was pretty hot! I really loved this story, amazing job luv, on the story! :3 -A |
| yome- san 10/7/12 . chapter 1 why isn't this a story whyyy.. |
| AwesumBananas 9/4/12 . chapter 1 It was amaaaaazing! |
| doodlertoday 9/3/12 . chapter 1 THEIR HAS TO BE MORE! THEIR JUST HAS TO BE! D': |
| Lena7213 8/23/12 . chapter 1 Okok! I'm reviewing! Just read a slew of NaruSasu so this was my little reintroduction to subNaru. I enjoyed your story and I actually like cop!Naruto. I don't think I've read a story with him in the police force before. Thanks for your hard work! |
| blue 8/8/12 . chapter 1 more plz, but i need to know wat is happening more |
| Areah51 7/15/12 . chapter 1 Ha! it was a fun story to read, I swear. Weird, since I thought you'd go even deeper in the explications of their lives, but I guess we all kind of got the whole picture, since I think what you wanted to show us was a sneek peek of their relationship, right? I liked it, it was good! |
| YaOi69LoVeR 6/11/12 . chapter 1 Oh god I loved it :-) I wish this came with a sequel -sighs- but all well it still was wonderfully written. You are a fabulous writer. |
| MusicFan Banana 5/19/12 . chapter 1 Firstly!, I'm not really sure if I already review this story but, what the heck? one review plus, one minus, right? This is so friking funny since the: "Oh Naru, it was horrible. There I was, minding my own business, and these big scary bast—er—men came and flung me into a car. Oh, Naruto." The brunet sighed dramatically, crushing the struggling, flailing blond to his chest as he bemoaned his fate. "It was so horrible. I think I'm scarred for life. Hold me." -(I can't imagine sasuke doing that but once I view it in my mind I can't hold the chuckles! and...) "Get him outta here Uzumaki," Kakashi yawned. "It's still the first twenty four hours after the crime…It'd be best if you kept an eye on him." Naruto sighed, but nodded. "Grab your junk, Sasuke." The Uchiha nodded solemnly and began to unbutton the hooks at his crotch. Naruto flung a stapler at him. "GAH! Not THAT you PERVERT!" You're the best of the best!, no you got me at your feet's! |
