|Reviews for Multiple Penetrations|
| O.O 1/28/13 . chapter 1
Please write moar!
| Guest 2/19/12 . chapter 3
I'll admit, I was linked to this chapter specifically by TV Tropes. It's that bad You made me mess up the pronunciation of "physics" while cursing you out about the fact that you clearly know nothing about physics. As an electric attack Thunder Wave would be more effective on Dewgong in the water because... well it's an electric attack. Electric is conducted by water.
Successful troll is successful.
(In the event that you are not a troll and this is actually serious, may *insert deity/non-deity here* have mercy on you for being so awful)
| Eternal Nightshade 1/15/12 . chapter 5
"Criticism of any kind is welcomed. :]"
Well, if you say so. I'll be blunt then, but since you said critique is welcome, I do hope you won't take it personally:
This was totally unrealistic. Even for bestiality, which is allowed to be somewhat bizarre, and pokemon bestiality at that, which is often allowed some credence in the "we know this isn't possible in real life, but bear with us" area? Yeah, no. Some of the wording and some of the actions were just plain awkward. And some of it kind of... contradicted itself.
I'm not sure you mapped this out much in your head because the mental image you're projecting, aside from being slightly freaky and somewhat kinky, is a little unreasonable.
Actually, the chapter with the wartortels was kind of ridiculous, too. Not what they all did, exactly, but how. I mean, the turtle-types may be pokemon, but you're also working with a normal human girl, so logic still needs to apply.
I'm assuming you're a girl and all, but I'm not sure how well you understand anatomy or sex in general because this implies you don't really have a clear concept of either.
| Teal'c 10/10/11 . chapter 1
| shriana 2/7/11 . chapter 6
...beastality...but i like flare.
| mistyrape 2/4/11 . chapter 6
seriously, do a threesome! that and since misty's becoming a slut she really should have sex already with ash and pikachu together
| ThatCrazyShinobi 9/12/10 . chapter 6
Okay. Good story so far. i like it. A couple things though.
1. this is a ash/misty fic right, the romance is to be thiers right?
2. please don't make misty pregnant with pokemon, cuz that would disturb me to no end. DON'T DO IT MAN!
3. please update soon.
| lila 8/14/10 . chapter 6
misty should get pregnant with puppies
| miya 8/14/10 . chapter 3
that was sick. just fucking sick
| guizel 7/4/10 . chapter 1
a great chapter it was well wrote easy to follow an excellent story and it made me cum well done truly a great chapter
| my friend 6/15/10 . chapter 6
OH MY GOD YOU CAN NOT LET HER SISTERS PLAY WITH FLARE! NOOOO! I WON'T ALLOW IT!
Double penetrations can be good If you use the right Pokemon... -coughs-
I hope you update soon
And if you ever take requests for PokexHuman please let me know, I have a pairing that I can't seem to find anywhere
| my friend 6/15/10 . chapter 5
I didn't so much like the beginning If you can't tell I'm more of a fluff lover
However, that was one of the best Pokeality lemon's I have read. I liked how you included the knot, a lot of people leave that out when it comes to canine based Pokemon.
I would love to see another lemon later on.
| my friend 6/14/10 . chapter 4
Yay! Flare is back and being loveded! :D
I hope you explain in future chapters how he got there though, and maybe through his perspective what happened with misty, like how much he really knows and such.
| my friend 6/14/10 . chapter 2
Damn you for killing Glare TTTT
You are so damn mean to your characters
At least he forgave his brother though, and he said his goodbyes, so I shall forgive you...for now
| my friend 6/14/10 . chapter 1
awww, I feel a bit sorry for the mean brother. All the time i was hoping that Flare would at least lick his muzzle to make it feel better, even if his brother did deserve it TTTT