I still love it. Such a brilliant story and you were amazing writing from Dog's POV. _

Excellent story. I understand that this is meant to line up with another's work (which I will now go and read), but it stands wonderfully on its own.

Of all the characters in Dragon Age, I am starting to think that Dog is the greatest.

Awwww...u r such a good writer. I love Dog.

Tears

Very interesting way of looking at the situation, and it's great how it links up with Crisium's work. You do a nice job of sketching out the relationship, the emotions, that develop during their travels, even from Dog's perspective, which is outside the romantic relationship. And that builds up to the downfall and the start of "What We Become". It all just comes together so nicely.

Oh. Beauty and heartbreak. Thank you.

This is amazing, the dog is one of my fav characters in the game and im glad someone wrote such an amazing story in his pov

This is brilliant and bittersweet.

That was beautiful and heartfelt. I absolutley loved it.

This is so lovely! And so sad. 3

Sigh, he reminds me of my schnauzer! Again, lovely story. Now i need to find my puppy and curl up with him.

So sad... reminds me of my own dog, sad but still heartwarming..

that's really beautiful...Sad and wistful. The ending really makes it, glad I read this.

I *love* this. Dog is such a wonderful character, and you've dawn him very, very well here. Thank you!

Just awesome. Very good characterization of everyone. Made me miss my own hound, to be honest. Again, great story. Good pacing.