This was excellent. The grammar was a little hard to follow at points, but you presented the situation and the changes well. It flowed as well as if it were the real thing. Good job :)

Well done. Very interesting for an AU - it will be interesting to see where you take this.

Good start, and interesting take on things.

This story seems to have a decent bit of potential, so I'll be waiting to see what you do with it.

Till next time,

MS

This was pretty good. It's doubtful they have a chance in hell, but they may as well try. Hm, maybe if they found Yoda they'd have a chance. Anyway, this was pretty good.