Now you just leave here waitng to see what happens. There is soo much left unsaid and much much more to explore. please come back and write more. Update soon, it is neever too late to come back and continue writing.

so far.. i was thinkging that the story was going well.. but not to me mean or anything... the second and third chapter doesnt make much sense... it will be seen in the other chapters?... well i hope so

YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED! DO YOU KNOW HOW WRONG THAT IS...? THIS STORY IS SO GOOD AND VERY WELL WRITTEN. PLEASE UPDATE!

I am finished reading your fic and I love it. The plot can be confusing at times but all in all it was great. I hope you continue to write because I really want to know what happens next, especially with Mamoru. I see it has been a while from updating so i am crossing my fingers that you will update soon...it deserves to be finished. :)

I just had to stop and write this...
This is such a good fic it is now one of my favourites. I have been hooked on it since this afternoon, it is full of angst. Well have to get back to reading so i can start my homework.

stupid thing won't let me sign on. Anyway, you have a wonderful talent and you're writing is really good. The one thing is that I think why you may lose some of your readers or not get very many reviews is because it's too confusing sometimes. Meaning you can only keep the mystery for so long, and also the narrative perspective is very confusing, because I never know who you're talking about until a bit into the chapter. So that draws away from the story. You've done well, really good stuff, but after while it's kind of tiring for the mind. :)) I am enjoying your story though, so just constructive criticism for the future. :)

Great chapter, Im still very confused tho, but in a good way (assuming that is possible -_-; ...)

I hope you update really soon, I cant wait to read what happens next.

Ja!

yeah, you updated! thank you for another great chapter. :-)

Ok...that was amazing!

I just finished all 18 chapters...and i want more!

I do hope you update really soon.

Ill be here reading it once you do _

Dont leave me hanging to long.

This is a very well written story. Im still a bit confussed...but as of right now im only to chapter 9. I found your story through StarLight Angels favorite stories. I must say...this story is very rapidly becoming one of my favorites as well _

woo!

I just finished reading these 18 chapters (and for one sitting that is a lot of reading)

At first I was very confused, your story is all shrouded in mystery and every thing.

But now Im starting to understand some of the elements. This parallel universe stuff, gets kinda confusing though.

I really like this story and I hope you see it through till the end.

I also hope Mamoru and Usagi end up back together somehow. Poor guy has been through so much;)

This is a great story. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more. I hope you get to update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens with everyone. This is very interesting story.

yay! u updated! happiness! i like it still! write more soon!

well...this is different...not the normal type of story..i like it and enjoy it good work update soon. I'll be checking for updates. Eo

okay i haven't gotten that far into reading you fic but im tired and must go to bed. i noticed that you were feelin a little blue from lack of reviews, but you must remember that jut because there aren't reviews doesn't mean there's a lack of readers. I think that there's only one thing you could change in you story, and that's how vague you are about the characters and what's going on. i really do like your story, don't get me wrong, but it's hard for people to keep up with a story if they don't know who's talking to who, and where they are. you need a little more setting and character info. i believe it was the third or fourth chapter when you switched and had her with some guy and their village was on fire, and what ever was after had found her again so the guy was trying to save her...

see, i like the idea, but there's not enough info and detail to tell me who the guy is, where they are, and who's after them. i'm guessing the guy is seiya and they're on kinmoku, but i've got NO clue what so ever as to who the evil person is. so yeah, i hope that doesn't sound as mean and bitchy as i think it does because i think your story IS great and you shoukld DEFINATELY keep writing, just give some more infor when ya do! kay? . please update lots and lots! .