|Reviews for And So We Run Redux: Part I|
| anonime 4/12/13 . chapter 11
Like it :)
| anonime 4/12/13 . chapter 10
| mountain mama 11/21/12 . chapter 15
I loved this story. I love the thought of Madge and Gale. I'm glad in your story she didn't die in the bombing.
| swimmer07 10/24/12 . chapter 1
I like the start!
| her illusion 10/9/12 . chapter 15
oooh,nice! and the last chap has such an adorably awkward note lol..drooling on ur bf's chin and having his mum talk to you.. xD
| Guest 7/14/12 . chapter 5
Eeeeewww! What a sicko!
| Guest 7/14/12 . chapter 3
| SrpiaEahn 4/21/12 . chapter 14
"His arms squeeze my waist. "Hell's teeth! You sink like lead."
I cough up some creek. "Thank you. Just what every girl wants to hear."
HAHAHAHAHA that is gold.
(Sorry for these pointless reviews)
| SrpiaEahn 4/21/12 . chapter 10
"But can Bristel set a snare in his sleep? Could he really take care of her? He's my best friend, but those things have to be considered objectively. Truth to tell, I could take better care of her than he could. I already am."
Bahahaha I love protective/mildly possessive Gale trying to convince himself that these are the reasons he's ticked.
| SrpiaEahn 4/21/12 . chapter 1
I might have reviewed before, can't really remember, but I just want to say that I LOVE the beginning. LOVE LOVE LOVE. So ominous, so beautifully written. My heart literally sank to the pit of my stomach.
| SJlikeslists 4/7/12 . chapter 15
Thank you so much for taking the time and effort to create and share this story.
| SJlikeslists 4/7/12 . chapter 14
Hmm . . . is Madge out of secrets to share now? :)
Gale's concluding statement about not keeping track was a wonderful note to end on.
| SJlikeslists 4/7/12 . chapter 13
I can't even begin to tell you how much I appreciate the touch of Gale throwing up. Perfectly crafted.
| SJlikeslists 4/7/12 . chapter 12
Talking so they are both on the same page - good.
Only marginally successful swimming lessons - cute.
The return of evil bad guys - grrrr.
| SJlikeslists 4/7/12 . chapter 11
I like this soul searching time for Gale. Everything isn't simple, and you didn't treat it like it was. Good job.