| Reviews for And So We Run Redux: Part I |
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anonime 4/12/13 . chapter 11 Like it :) |
anonime 4/12/13 . chapter 10 Like it! |
mountain mama 11/21/12 . chapter 15I loved this story. I love the thought of Madge and Gale. I'm glad in your story she didn't die in the bombing. |
swimmer07 10/24/12 . chapter 1I like the start! |
her illusion 10/9/12 . chapter 15oooh,nice! and the last chap has such an adorably awkward note lol..drooling on ur bf's chin and having his mum talk to you.. xD |
Guest 7/14/12 . chapter 5 Eeeeewww! What a sicko! |
Guest 7/14/12 . chapter 3 Ooooowwww |
SrpiaEahn 4/21/12 . chapter 14"His arms squeeze my waist. "Hell's teeth! You sink like lead." I cough up some creek. "Thank you. Just what every girl wants to hear." HAHAHAHAHA that is gold. (Sorry for these pointless reviews) |
SrpiaEahn 4/21/12 . chapter 10"But can Bristel set a snare in his sleep? Could he really take care of her? He's my best friend, but those things have to be considered objectively. Truth to tell, I could take better care of her than he could. I already am." Bahahaha I love protective/mildly possessive Gale trying to convince himself that these are the reasons he's ticked. |
SrpiaEahn 4/21/12 . chapter 1I might have reviewed before, can't really remember, but I just want to say that I LOVE the beginning. LOVE LOVE LOVE. So ominous, so beautifully written. My heart literally sank to the pit of my stomach. - Sera |
SJlikeslists 4/7/12 . chapter 15Thank you so much for taking the time and effort to create and share this story. |
SJlikeslists 4/7/12 . chapter 14Hmm . . . is Madge out of secrets to share now? :) Gale's concluding statement about not keeping track was a wonderful note to end on. |
SJlikeslists 4/7/12 . chapter 13I can't even begin to tell you how much I appreciate the touch of Gale throwing up. Perfectly crafted. |
SJlikeslists 4/7/12 . chapter 12Talking so they are both on the same page - good. Only marginally successful swimming lessons - cute. The return of evil bad guys - grrrr. |
SJlikeslists 4/7/12 . chapter 11I like this soul searching time for Gale. Everything isn't simple, and you didn't treat it like it was. Good job. |