keep up the good work.

I'm definitely intrigued. The intro caught my attention and I was not expecting

the ending at all. Overall, it looks pretty good. There are a couple of spelling

errors that I caught but they can be fixed easily. I usually shy away from stories

where Usagi becomes evil on the simple basis that she is very quickly healed

and spends the rest of the story angsting over the situation. I hope you'll keep her evil

a little longer. Dark Serenity sounds interesting.

This story sounds really good so far! _ I can't wait to find out what happens next to Serenity.

can't wait for the next chapter to be out!

Wow! Like...wow. I'm curious. Write more. Please.