The idea is good but the ending is neither here or there.

*sniffle* OMG... Just OMG. *sniffle*

Oh wow! I loved this. So beautifully done and devastating in the best way. I love that he never gives up. And I love how natural they are together. This piece offers closure and a beginning. Your way of narrating feels very fresh and wise somehow. Hm.

Love is strongest in pain. Well done.

very poetic, very beautiul.

meow

This is a very sad story... but I liked it... I like the fact that she dosen't cry until the very end... I can totally understand the feeling, it sometimes takes time to really understand that the person is gone...

Very well written. Quite beautiful actually.

Whoa. (:

Eloquent and powerful - I love it.

OME I am crying like a baby. This is so good. So sad so terrible so sweet.

very deep and very beautiful.

All of it was devine and magical.

Hi, I kinda liked it really. It had defenetly a lot of very deep down emotions that could be felt easilly, so I really appreciate it!

I really loved this story! My god you're such an amazing writer, very deep

Lurve Coco

That was really beautiful. Very well written and sophisticated story, the realism was refreshing in this genre.

This was really, really awesome.