That was really well written :) You need to update soon!

This was written well but there are a couple of typos don't worry I make some too. is there a book about Marco in the elyon series?

Hi

Okay I really liked it and I would really like you to continue so.

HURRY UP AND UPDATE!

Kii-Bye

aw, it's cute!

Haha, that was fun to read this from Marco's point of view, already knowing everything from Alexa's.

Unfortunately, you had quite a few typos. For instance, you wrote 'while' instead of 'wild', and you wrote 'quite' instead of 'quiet'. Those were just a couple. You had more then that. But it's ok! Everyone gets typos. Unless they edit so stinking much that there are none...Which I haven't done yet...[she said sheepsishly.]

Are you going to continue this? Well, what I mean to say is, are you going to write about what happens after? (Well, what YOU think happens afterwards.) Are you? Are you? Are you? Are you? ARE YOU?

wow i loved it but i want there to be more of the storie and alexa and marco should be more like together...3 u know...