Hi! I love your story! I've read it twice now, and I was wondering if you are going to put up the final chapter? Even just a synopsis! I really want to know what happens! Please do :) I love this story, it is a wonderful idea and you portray it so well! Thankyou, and please update!

O. F. S.

I knew Luke was a traitor! Ha I'm always right like piper! X3

Eclipsethevamp14

Another quick guess! Is Luke "top dog" from that one episode in the first season?

Eclipsethevamp14

I kinda hate piper right now she's a poor judge of character. Couldn't she see that HE was PROTECTING her... Well again I like it so far

Eclipsethevamp14

Just a little guess at something... Is Flynn Aerrow? Or some other person cuz some of u people insist that Lightning strike was Aerrow's father but in the show it says that Aerrow is a last descendent so yeah just a guess and a question though my guess will be answered as I read on so so far it's a good story! I've always wondered what happened to Aerrow an the rest of the gang bfore "origins"

Eclipsethevamp14

Please update!

I want to see what happens!

Epic story.

Denvana

Aww, poor Lily.

"It's your destiny." So, wait, he knows about the Guardians' prophecy? Unless he IS a Guardian, in disguise! Now wouldn't that be something? X)

GC,US!

-Diehard

Hey Blue!

haha you have a good point, I do seem to pull a lot of things out of no where lol

Poor Finn and Lily :( Yes I know odd for me to feel sympathy for the guy but the situation is really cruel :S

It was a damn good chapter! can't wait for the last one!

From the one they call Doilan.

Aww...poor Finn lost his Lily. Well she had to get out the story sometime soon anyway.

There's only one more chapter? I'm really going to miss reading and reviewing each chapter. Are you going to do a sequel?

Great job Blue. Can't wait to read the final chapter.

*Glitterwave*

Aw, they left Lily behind! Well, we knew she had to get out of the picture sometime . . .

Great job as always. Looking forward to more.

Gah, I'm so so so so so so sorry for not reviewing the last few chapters, but you posted them before I could get a chance! Darn you, exams! Ah well, now I'm caught up on the story, and can leave a long review. But I must apologise beforehand on all the spelling mistakes I am about to make. It's 1 in the morning, but I just can't wait 'till tomorow to review.

So, regarding the previous chapter, Luke's alergic to Radarr? Like the crystals in episode 52 were? Hmm... they must be related! Come to think of it, I see the resemblance. They're both evil, vicious snakes.

And speaking of Luke: I'm sorta glad he's evil. Not that being evil is good, but I never liked that little creep. I'm glad to see him exposed. But you did so well with hiding his true nature! I'd say you had me guessing right up to the last second, but I did suspect him slightly. Like I said, I never liked the little creepp.

I can't wait to see what happens next, and I love the titles of the last two chapters! But where's the shovel?

Oh, and about New World, New Rules? :D Let's hurt Aerrow!

-Diehard

Aww...Piper got hit by the red blast from Luke.

On a happier note, YAY! Aerrow is back! (Well he wasn't really gone anway but meh...)

So Luke's not coming back into the story? Great. )

Keep on writing Blue, you're awesome!

*Glitterwave*

Yay, new chapter! And Finn and Lily are back!

So wait, who wass screaming? Oh, now I'm so confused.

Can't wait for the next chapter (then maybe I won't be confused . . .)

Hey Blue!

The dramatic end of Luke... good riddence I say lol.

umbrella? oh the horrible things you could do with that XD

So it wasn't Cyclonis? or was it I'm a little confused at the moment but I'm sure it will be answered soon enough lol

another well done chapter!

From the one they call Doilan

dont exams stink?

we finished ours last thursday. yeay!

keep writing,

and, good chpter btw.

Rita